Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and grammar, give a concise topic sentence and one supporting detail. Avoid filler phrases like "you know" and correct articles and plural forms. Use a linking word if adding detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset because the light creates dramatic contrasts and interesting silhouettes.

Gợi ý: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear preference or say you like both, then give specific reasons using linking words. Remove hesitation sounds and fix article usage.

Ví dụ: I enjoy both urban and rural views. Urban areas appeal to me because of their architecture and lively streets, while rural scenes are relaxing due to wide-open spaces and natural colors.

Gợi ý: Clarify the sentence structure and use proper articles and subject-verb agreement. State your preference clearly or explain why both are appealing, with a linking word and a specific example.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in both my country and abroad because each place has its unique atmosphere. For instance, local landscapes feel familiar and comforting, whereas views in other countries often showcase new cultures and architectural styles.

× Yes, a lot. I do love to take a pictures reviews and you know.

✓ Yes, a lot. I do love taking pictures of various views, you know.

The error involves incorrect use of the base verb 'take' with a plural noun and an unnecessary noun 'reviews'. After verbs like 'love', the -ing form is commonly used when speaking about activities ('love taking pictures'). Also use the preposition 'of' with 'pictures' to indicate what is pictured and replace 'a pictures reviews' with 'pictures of various views' to be grammatically correct and meaningful. Suggestion: use 'love taking' + 'pictures of' + a clear noun phrase.

× I really love the both views, the urban areas and rural areas.

✓ I really love both the urban areas and the rural areas.

Incorrect article placement: 'the both views' is ungrammatical. Use 'both' before the coordinated noun phrase or 'both the X and the Y'. Also include 'the' before 'rural areas' to parallel 'the urban areas'. Suggestion: use 'both the A and the B' or 'both A and B' with consistent articles.

× This kind of views are giving uh, different vibes.

✓ This kind of view gives, uh, different vibes.

Subject-verb agreement and count noun form: 'This kind of views' is incorrect because 'this kind of' should be followed by a singular noun 'view' or use 'these kinds of views'. With singular subject 'this kind of view' use singular verb 'gives'. Also avoid progressive 'are giving' here; 'gives' is more natural. Suggestion: choose matching singular/plural forms and correct verb agreement.

× I think I prefer both in my country is another countries because they're giving the different vibe of their own.

✓ I think I prefer both in my country and in other countries because they give their own different vibes.

Several pronoun and structure issues: 'is another countries' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'countries'; use 'and in other countries'. 'They're giving' is awkward; 'they give' matches present habitual meaning. 'The different vibe of their own' is unnatural—use 'their own different vibes' or 'their own unique vibes'. Suggestion: keep parallel structure ('in my country and in other countries'), match plural forms, and use simple present for habitual actions.