Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and relevant but a bit fragmented and slightly repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid short, choppy sentences by combining related ideas and giving a brief reason or example to make your response more coherent and informative.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I enjoy capturing nature’s beauty; for example, I often photograph sunsets and forests to share on social media. In addition, sharing these photos with friends helps me remember special moments and get feedback on my photography.

Gợi ý: Good direct response with specific details, but the answer repeats 'love' and could be more concise and connected with linking words. Combine sentences and add a brief explanation or contrast to strengthen the response.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I’m fond of natural landscapes; for instance, I enjoy the greenery and the calm blue rivers, which feel more relaxing than busy city scenes.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses a personal preference and emotion, which is good, but sentence structure and grammar need polishing. Use a clear topic sentence, then support with specific examples or reasons linked logically. Avoid awkward phrasing and ensure correct tense and article use (e.g., 'the ocean', 'how beautiful life can be').

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I love the ocean; for example, since my country has mainly mountains and rivers, I find the sea’s vastness and gentle waves very calming and a reminder to take breaks and appreciate life.

× I prefer views in other countries as I love ocean.

✓ I prefer views in other countries as I love the ocean.

'Ocean' is a singular, countable noun when referring to the ocean as a general concept, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Use 'the ocean' to refer to the sea in general. Suggestion: use 'the ocean' or 'oceans' depending on whether you mean the ocean in general or oceans in general.

× I come from a country where there are mountains and rivers but I prefer the calm nature of the ocean.

✓ I come from a country with mountains and rivers, but I prefer the calm of the ocean.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but wordy and slightly awkward. 'Where there are' is unnecessary; 'a country with mountains and rivers' is more natural. Also 'the calm nature of the ocean' is redundant; 'the calm of the ocean' is clearer. Suggestion: simplify noun phrases and use commas before coordinating conjunctions joining independent clauses.

× It reminds me that I need to take a break from my life and how beautiful can life be.

✓ It reminds me that I need to take a break from my life and how beautiful life can be.

The clause 'how beautiful can life be' incorrectly uses question word order within a declarative sentence. In reported/descriptive clauses, use subject–verb order: 'how beautiful life can be.' Suggestion: use declarative word order for indirect statements and avoid mixing question structure into statements.