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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like umm, I like take mountain and sea and blue sky umm, I take picture, share share with my friend on social media. I like take picture.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I preferred rural areas because the air is more fresh and the environment is more more beautiful and because I live in the Uber area so I think rural area is more.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I pay for other countries views because I love driving and in last year I go to the Africa, Tanzania and America. The travel traveling go to other country feel make me feel very exciting and happy so I prefer.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并注意语法与连贯性。避免重复词(如“like”或“take”反复出现),使用完整句,适当用连接词扩展细节。例如说明你什么时候拍照、用什么设备、喜欢分享的原因等。控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of mountains, the sea and clear blue skies because they look very dramatic. I usually take pictures when I travel or go hiking and use my smartphone or a small DSLR. I often edit the best shots slightly and share them with friends on social media to keep memories and get feedback.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 注意时态与语法,使用单一清晰的主句并用连接词给出理由。避免模糊表达(如“more”重复和“Uber area”不明确),提供具体对比细节,比如噪音、绿地或建筑风格。保持句子数在5句以内。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because the air is fresher and the scenery is more peaceful. In the countryside there is less noise and more greenery, which makes it easier to relax. Also, I find traditional buildings and open fields more attractive than crowded city streets.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 纠正词汇与语法错误(如“pay for”应为“prefer”或“pay attention to”),使用正确时态并给出具体例子。说明为何喜欢外国景色(例如文化差异、风景多样性或体验新事物),并控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing different landscapes and cultures. Last year I visited Tanzania and the United States, and driving through new places made me feel excited and curious. Seeing unfamiliar wildlife and architecture gives me a fresh perspective that I don't always find at home.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I like umm, I like take mountain and sea and blue sky umm, I take picture, share share with my friend on social media. I like take picture.

Yes, I like, umm, I like taking pictures of mountains, the sea, and the blue sky. I take pictures and share them with my friends on social media. I like taking pictures.

错误类型:动词+ing形式使用错误(喜欢后应接动名词)。解释:英语中动词like后面通常接动名词(-ing)表示喜好。句中应使用 taking 而不是 take;同时复数形式 pictures 更自然,因为谈论拍摄多张照片。还需使用代词 them 指代前文的 pictures,并使用 friends 的复数。建议:在 like 后使用 taking;名词复数与代词保持一致。

5: Past tense issue

× I preferred rural areas because the air is more fresh and the environment is more more beautiful and because I live in the Uber area so I think rural area is more.

I prefer rural areas because the air is fresher and the environment is more beautiful. I live in an urban area, so I think rural areas are nicer.

错误类型:过去时与现在时混用、形容词比较级使用不当及冠词/词汇错误。解释:回答当前偏好应使用一般现在时 prefer,而不是 preferred(过去式)。形容词 fresh 的比较级是 fresher,不是 more fresh;重复的 more more 要删除。urban(城市的)被错误写为 Uber(品牌名),应为 urban area,并且提到泛指地区用冠词 an,且复数 rural areas 与 are 呼应。建议:使用一般现在时表达现在的喜好,使用正确的比较级形式,注意冠词与拼写。

7: Future tense issue

× I pay for other countries views because I love driving and in last year I go to the Africa, Tanzania and America. The travel traveling go to other country feel make me feel very exciting and happy so I prefer.

I prefer views in other countries because I love driving. Last year I went to Africa, Tanzania, and the United States. Traveling to other countries makes me feel very excited and happy, so I prefer them.

错误类型:时态错误与动词形式错误及词序问题。解释:表达过去的经历应使用一般过去时 went 而不是 go。句首 I pay for other countries views 不合适,应为 I prefer views in other countries。traveling 的重复需去掉,动词 make 的主谓一致应为 makes(traveling 作主语,第三人称单数)。America 更常用正式表达 the United States。建议:用 prefer 表达偏好,用 went 描述过去经历,确保主谓一致并删除多余词汇。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
ExcitingThrilling; Arousing
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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