Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, accurate and use correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and pronunciation errors, and give one or two specific examples with linking words. Also correct word choice (e.g., 'different views', 'parks', 'forests', 'water bodies') and grammar (use present simple for habits).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visit parks or forests I photograph trees and trails, and near lakes I take photos of the water and reflections, so I can look back at these memories later.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect words ('wasted towns'). Keep sentences short and correct word order and articles.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and less crowded. For example, the countryside usually has open fields and hills that make me feel relaxed and peaceful.

Gợi ý: Give a clear balanced opinion and support it with specific contrasts. Use linking words (however, whereas, for example) and avoid filler words and grammar mistakes. Be precise about features you like in each country.

Ví dụ: I enjoy views in both my country and abroad. For example, in India I like the varied landscapes and cultural sights, whereas in Canada I appreciate the vast mountains and lakes; both offer different kinds of beauty.

× Undoubtedly I am I am really into taking pictures of her different views.

✓ Undoubtedly, I am really into taking pictures of different views.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrect and unnecessary here; it does not refer to any noun in context. Remove 'her' to make the sentence clear. Also remove the repeated 'I am' for fluency. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Whenever I visit different places Parkway and Seneca places, I always take a features of foresters and and butter bodies that gives that helps me to preserve my memories and remember it in future when I need.

✓ Whenever I visit different places, such as Parkway and Seneca, I always take photos of forests and water bodies that help me preserve my memories and remember them in the future when I need to.

Multiple issues: extra plural/article errors and word choice. 'a features' is incorrect; use 'photos' or 'features' without 'a'. 'foresters' should be 'forests'; 'butter bodies' is a misspelling of 'water bodies'. 'that gives that helps me' is ungrammatical; use 'that help me' because 'photos' (plural) requires plural verb agreement. Use 'them' to refer back to 'memories'. Also add commas and rephrase for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 22, 26, 27

× Well, rather than urban area, I prefer views of rural areas.

✓ Well, rather than urban areas, I prefer views of rural areas.

'Urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' to match 'rural areas' and generalize the category. This is an article/number agreement and noun form issue; use plural for consistency. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Whenever I wasted towns, they give me a sense of relaxation, calm as the as this area is very very easily not very much crowded, so I prefer it.

✓ Whenever I visit small towns, they give me a sense of relaxation and calm because these areas are not very crowded, so I prefer them.

'Wasted' is incorrect; likely intended 'visit' or 'was in'. 'Towns' may be 'small towns' for sense. 'they give me' is fine but follow with 'a sense of relaxation and calm'. 'as the as this area is very very easily not very much crowded' is ungrammatical — replace with 'because these areas are not very crowded'. Pronoun 'it' should match plural 'towns' → 'them'. Grammar problem type ID: 26, 12

× All in my perspective, I prefer both the country's views, uh, as in India, uh, it's a more like, uh, geographical here in Canada, the places are different.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer the views of both countries. For example, in India the scenery is different, and here in Canada the landscapes are also different.

'All in my perspective' is awkward; use 'From my perspective'. 'both the country's views' is incorrect; use 'the views of both countries'. 'it's a more like, uh, geographical' is unclear — rephrase to 'the scenery is different'. Separate into two sentences for clarity and correct pronoun/reference. Grammar problem type ID: 12, 26

× There are lot of uh, hills, mountains and water bodies.

✓ There are a lot of hills, mountains, and water bodies.

Missing article 'a' before 'lot' — correct phrase is 'a lot of'. The verb 'are' is correct for plural. Add serial comma for clarity. This is an article/quantifier error. Grammar problem type ID: 14

× So according to their beauty, it's both are very good.

✓ So in terms of beauty, both are very beautiful.

'According to their beauty' is awkward; use 'in terms of beauty'. 'it's both are' is ungrammatical; choose 'both are'. 'Very good' can be replaced with 'very beautiful' to match meaning. This fixes pronoun and structure errors. Grammar problem type ID: 26