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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes I did. I really like travel in last year I go to Africa and America. I like take picture of views. Umm I enjoy this activities.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I preferred rural areas because I'm leaving Uber areas. I think it's not different so I'm prefer rural areas and rural areas may make me feel happy and relaxation.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I preferred in other countries, umm, because I like different countries culture and different uh, different food, different views, umm.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要用现在时或一般过去时的一致性,句子应更自然并避免重复。可以用一到两句主题句回答,然后补充具体细节(例如拍摄哪些景色、使用何种设备或拍照目的)。注意语法(例如 I did → I do / I did last year; I enjoy this activities → I enjoy these activities)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. Last year I traveled to Africa and the United States and photographed landscapes, city skylines and local people using my DSLR because I like capturing memories and unique scenes.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子时态和词汇拼写需修正(preferred → prefer;I'm leaving Uber areas → I live in urban areas)。回答要有清晰主题句并用连接词给出具体原因和例子。避免模糊表达(例如 'not different'),改为具体对比城市与乡村的不同之处。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because they are quieter and more peaceful. For example, I enjoy wide open spaces, fresh air and natural scenery, which help me relax after a busy week in the city.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 保持时态一致(prefer而非 preferred)。回答应有主题句并用连接词列举具体原因,给出具体例子说明为什么喜欢国外风景,如文化差异、独特景观或特定国家的特色场景。减少重复词语与填充词。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I love seeing traditional festivals in Asia and dramatic coastlines in Europe, which offer scenery and experiences I can't find at home.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I did. I really like travel in last year I go to Africa and America.

Yes, I did. I really liked traveling last year. I went to Africa and America.

句子中描述过去发生的动作应使用过去时。因此“like”应改为过去式“liked”;“travel”作为动名词或动词短语在此处应为“traveling”;另外“I go”表示现在时,描述已发生的旅游应使用过去式“I went”。建议:描述过去事件时统一使用过去时态并注意动词形式。

Verb + -ing form

× I like take picture of views.

I like taking pictures of views.

动词“like”后接动词时通常用动名词形式,因此“take”应改为“taking”。名词“picture”若泛指多次或多张应用复数“pictures”。建议:like 后接 -ing 形式,复数名词视语境使用。

Singular and plural issue

× Umm I enjoy this activities.

Umm I enjoy these activities.

“this”用于单数名词,而“activities”是复数,代词与名词必须在数上一致,因此应使用复数指示代词“these”。建议:确保指示代词与所指名词在单复数上一致。

Past tense issue

× I preferred rural areas because I'm leaving Uber areas.

I prefer rural areas because I'm leaving urban areas.

这里原句有多处问题:考生想表达“我更喜欢乡村,因为我离开城市(?)”但上下文应为比较现在的偏好,正确用现在时“prefer”。原句使用“preferred”把语境置于过去,不符合问题询问现在偏好。另有拼写错误“Uber”应为“urban”。若想表达“我住在城市”,应为“I'm living in urban areas”或更自然“I live in urban areas”。建议:回答偏好问题用一般现在时;注意拼写并根据意图选择“live”或“living”。

Present tense issue

× I think it's not different so I'm prefer rural areas and rural areas may make me feel happy and relaxation.

I think they're not very different, so I prefer rural areas. Rural areas make me feel happy and relaxed.

此处要点:1) 指代“views”或“areas”应使用复数代词“they're”;2) “prefer”作为一般现在时表达偏好,不应与“I'm prefer”混用;3) “may make me feel happy and relaxation”中“relaxation”是名词,要用形容词“relaxed”来描述感觉;“may”可省略以显确切表达。建议:回答偏好时用一般现在时,注意代词一致性和形容词/名词形式的正确使用。

Past tense issue

× I preferred in other countries, umm, because I like different countries culture and different uh, different food, different views, umm.

I prefer other countries, because I like different countries' cultures, different foods and different views.

同样这是在回答现在的偏好问题,应使用一般现在时“prefer”而非过去式“preferred”。另外短语“different countries culture”需加所有格或复数形式,应为“different countries' cultures”或“the cultures of different countries”。“food”在泛指不同食物时常用复数“foods”。建议:回答偏好用现在时,处理名词所有格或复数以表达多样性。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
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