Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: もっと流暢で論理的に答える練習をしましょう。まず質問に対する簡潔な主題文を述べ、その後で具体的な例や詳細を1〜2文で補足します。不要なつぶやき（uh, umm）は減らし、語順や表現（例えば “I like to take pictures of flowers or interesting buildings”）を明確にしましょう。また語彙は簡潔で関連性のある語を使い、文は最大5文に抑えてください。発音や文法の誤り（our→of, number→of, new or paper food→near my home or places I visitなど）を直すとさらに良くなります。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures when I go for walks because I often see beautiful flowers and interesting buildings. For example, near my home there is a small garden where I regularly take photos of seasonal flowers. I find photography helps me notice details I would otherwise miss.

Gợi ý: 答えは明確ですが混乱を招く語順や不要なフィラーが多いです。まず直接的に“rural areas”か“urban areas”のどちらかを示す主題文にし、その理由を1〜2文で論理的に述べてください。接続詞（because, so, for example）を使って理由をつなげると聞き手に伝わりやすくなります。具体的な描写（静か、自然が多い、空気がきれいなど）を加えると内容が豊かになります。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and closer to nature. For example, in the countryside I can enjoy peaceful walks among trees and fields, which helps me relax more than being in a busy city.

Gợi ý: 答えがあいまいで、理由がはっきりしていません。明確な主題文（I prefer views in Japan）を述べ、その後に具体的な理由を一つか二つ示してください。幼少期の思い出や文化的背景が理由なら、それを簡潔に説明すると説得力が増します。フィラーを減らし、文を短く整理することを心がけてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, Japan, because I am familiar with the landscapes and they feel comforting. For instance, seeing traditional temples and seasonal cherry blossoms reminds me of childhood memories and local culture.

× Yes, of course, uh, whenever I I go now umm umm uh, for example, I am everyday I go for a walk, I like to take our picture number flowers in our new or paper food I met the first time.

✓ Yes, of course. For example, every day when I go for a walk, I like to take pictures of flowers and new places I discover.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure issues: repeated words, misplaced adverbs, and unclear noun phrases. Simplify and reorder to form clear clauses: 'every day' before 'when I go for a walk', use plural 'pictures' (singular/plural issue) and clear nouns 'flowers' and 'new places'. Remove filler sounds and repetitions. Suggestions: remove hesitations, place time expressions correctly, use plural for countable nouns when appropriate, and keep one main idea per sentence.

× Nor uh for me, I like better to umm better. I love better umm country or more peaceful umm prices umm rather than umm umm umm city or the people uh.

✓ For me, I prefer the countryside because it is more peaceful than the city and its crowds.

The original uses unclear pronouns and awkward comparative constructions. Use 'I prefer' instead of 'I like better', and 'the countryside' (definite article for a general place) rather than 'country'. 'More peaceful than the city and its crowds' clearly compares two things; avoid vague pronouns like 'the people'. Suggestions: use clear pronouns and standard comparative structures: 'prefer A to B' or 'A is more ... than B'.

× I put it for it umm, Japan, uh, where I grew up, umm umm, rather than taking good umm, other countries, umm uh, because I, I was since when I was a child, I, I literally found no.

✓ I prefer Japan, where I grew up, to other countries because since I was a child I have felt a strong connection to it.

This sentence suffers from unclear phrasing and tense problems. Use 'prefer A to B' to express preference. 'Since I was a child' requires a present perfect or present perfect continuous ('have felt') to connect past to present. Remove filler words and repetitions. Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B', place 'where I grew up' as a relative clause, and use appropriate perfect tense for states that began in the past and continue now.