Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: နောက်ထပ် ပိုသေချာပြီး သဘာဝကျတဲ့ အဖြေ တစ်ခုပေးရန် သင်၏ အဖြေကို စကားလုံးအနည်းငယ် ပြင်၍ grammar အမှားများကို တိုးတက်အောင်လုပ်ပါ။ (1) စာဝင်ပုံစံကို ချိန်ဆ အဖြေအောင် ‘photographing’ ↔ ‘taking photographs’ ကိုသုံးပါ။ (2) singular/plural အမှား (“take picture” → “take pictures”) ကိုပြင်ပါ။ (3) အကြောင်းပြချက်များကို linking words (for example, because, so) ဖြင့် ပိုမိုစဉ်ဆက်မပြတ်အောင် ဆက်ပါ။ ၄-၅ စာကန့်သတ်အတွင်း တိုက်ရိုက် topic sentence နဲ့ supporting details ပေးပါ။

Ví dụ: I don't usually take many pictures because I prefer to enjoy the scenery in the moment. For example, when I visit a temple or a beautiful landscape, I like to walk around and feel the atmosphere rather than stop to take photos. This helps me remember the place more clearly.

Gợi ý: အဖြေကို ပိုတိုတို၊ ပိုသေချာရေးထိုးရန် grammar နှင့် collocation များကိုတိကျစေရန် ပြင်ဆင်ပါ။ (1) subject-verb agreement (“they are” → “they are” ok but referent clarity: ‘rural areas’). (2) Collocation အတွက် “less harsh” သို့ “less crowded and less noisy” သုံးပါ။ (3) singular/plural အချက် (“the star” → “the stars”) ကိုပြင်ပါ။ Linking phrase တစ်ခုထည့်၍ supporting detail ပိုကောင်းစေပါ။

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are less crowded and much quieter than cities. There is less light pollution, so the skies are clearer and I can easily see the stars and the moon. That peaceful atmosphere is very relaxing for me.

Gợi ý: ဤအဖြေတွင် vocabulary နှင့် grammar အမှားများရှိသည်၊ ထူးခြားသောစကားလုံး (e.g., “matrix”) မသင့်ပါ။ (1) “I prefer you” → “I prefer” သို့ပြန်ရေးပါ။ (2) noun collocations: “beautiful beaches, mountains and quiet countryside.” (3) avoid inappropriate words like “matrix”; use “traditions” or “culture”။ (4) တိုကြပ်သော topic sentence ထဲတွင် ပြည့်စုံသော supporting detail နှင့် linking words (such as ‘for example’, ‘because’) ထည့်ပါ။

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country rather than abroad because there are many relaxing places here. For example, we have beautiful beaches, high mountains and quiet countryside. I also enjoy the local sunrise and traditional culture, which feel very special to me.

× I'm not really into photographing.

✓ I'm not really into photography.

The verb + -ing form 'photographing' is grammatically possible but sounds awkward here; 'into' is usually followed by a noun (gerund noun 'photography') rather than the progressive action. Use 'photography' for natural phrasing. (Myanmar: 'into' နဲ့ အာရုံစိုက်မှုကို ဖေါ်ရာမှာ gerund တစ်ခုက function noun အဖြစ် သုံးလေ့ရှိပြီး 'photography' သုံးပါ။)

× I usually don't have time to take picture because I prefer to enjoy and appreciate the scenery and the movement.

✓ I usually don't have time to take pictures because I prefer to enjoy and appreciate the scenery and movement.

The count noun 'picture' when meaning photos should be plural 'pictures' after 'take'. Also 'the movement' is unclear and unnecessary; 'movement' without article or omit entirely. (Myanmar: 'picture' ကို count noun အနေနဲ့ ဘာသာပြန်လို့ များသောအားဖြင့် plural 'pictures' သုံးရပါတယ်။ 'the movement' က မပြတ်သားပါ။)

× For example, when I visit a temple or a beautiful landscape, I like to experience the atmosphere rather than stop and take photo.

✓ For example, when I visit a temple or a beautiful landscape, I like to experience the atmosphere rather than stop and take a photo.

Before a singular countable noun 'photo' you need an article 'a'. Without it the sentence is ungrammatical. Alternatively use plural 'photos'. (Myanmar: singular countable noun များကို article အပါအဝင် လိုအပ်ပါတယ်။ 'a photo' သို့မဟုတ် 'photos' သုံးပါ။)

× I prefer living in a rural area because they are less crowded and harsh, much less light pollution than city.

✓ I prefer living in a rural area because they are less crowded and harsh, and there is much less light pollution than in the city.

Pronoun 'they' does not match singular 'a rural area'; either use plural 'rural areas' or adjust pronoun. 'Much less light pollution than city' needs 'there is' and 'in the city' for correct comparison. (Myanmar: 'a rural area' ဆိုတဲ့ singular နဲ့ 'they' မကိုက်ပါ၊ 'there is' နဲ့ 'in the city' လည်း လိုအပ်ပါတယ်။)

× The skies are clear out there so I can easily see the star and the moon and I find that peaceful atmosphere very relaxing.

✓ The skies are clear out there so I can easily see the stars and the moon, and I find that peaceful atmosphere very relaxing.

When referring to stars in general use plural 'stars'. Add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. (Myanmar: 'star' ကို plural 'stars' သုံးရသည်။)

× I prefer you in my own country rather than in other countries.

✓ I prefer it in my own country rather than in other countries.

'Prefer you' wrongly uses second-person pronoun; context requires 'it' or 'views' as the object. Using 'it' refers back to 'views'. (Myanmar: 'you' သုံးခြင်း မသင့်တော်ပါ၊ ရှေ့က subject ကို ရည်ညွှန်းဖို့ 'it' သို့မဟုတ် 'views' သုံးပါ။)

× There are many relaxing places here, such as beautiful beach and mountain and quite countryside, and the sunrise and local culture matrix at home is very enjoyable.

✓ There are many relaxing places here, such as beautiful beaches, mountains, and quiet countryside, and the sunrise and local culture at home are very enjoyable.

Use plural 'beaches' and 'mountains' when speaking generally. 'Quite' is wrong adjective; should be 'quiet'. 'Matrix' is incorrect word choice; remove it. Subject 'sunrise and local culture' is plural so use 'are'. (Myanmar: general reference တွေမှာ plural သုံးရပါမယ်၊ 'quiet' ကို မှန်ကန်စွာ သုံးပါ၊ 'matrix' ဆိုသည်မှာ မသင့်တော်ပါ။)}]} }}</ReportGrammarArguments> PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A PMID: N/A 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