Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like it, but umm, moderation because they are very beautiful and cute. The century is very nice and wonderful.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
No, not much, because the city is better, because there is development and there is a lot of renewal and is on countryside, there is little or no development.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, because I think that there will be a new environment, broader thinking grows, speaking and learning in other countries. For example, I when, for example, when I went to Turkey, my opinion about them changed a lot.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Javobni qisqa va aniq qiling. Keraksiz ovozli to‘xtovlar (masalan, “umm”) va noaniq so‘zlardan qoching. Avvalo to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri mavzuni ayting (ha/yo‘q), keyin 1–2 ta aniq sabab bering va misol bilan yakunlang. So‘z boyligini oshiring (masalan, “beautiful” o‘rniga “scenic” yoki “striking”).
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I find scenic landscapes very inspiring. For example, I often photograph sunsets and mountain vistas, which capture vivid colors and interesting shapes. I usually take pictures in moderation to focus on quality rather than quantity.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Javobni aniq tuzing: bir xil fikrni takrorlamang va bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (because, so, however) oqilona foydalaning. Birinchi gapda tanlovingizni ayting, keyin 1–2 ta aniq sabab va qisqacha misol keltiring. Tugal grammatik tuzilmalarga eʼtibor bering (masalan, “the countryside has less development”).
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer modern architecture and constant renewal. For instance, downtown areas often have striking skyscrapers and renovated public spaces, while the countryside tends to be quieter and less developed.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Javobni tuzing: avvalo aniq javob (ha/yo‘q) bilan boshlang, keyin 1–2 ta sabab bering va aniq misolni mantiqan keltiring. Keraksiz takrorlardan saqlaning. Ingliz tilida ekspressiv, toza iboralar ishlating (masalan, “broaden my perspective” o‘rniga “broader thinking grows”).
Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer views in other countries because they expose me to different cultures and broaden my perspective. For example, when I visited Turkey, I experienced new architectural styles and local traditions that changed my view of the country and inspired me to learn more.
× Yes, I like it, but umm, moderation because they are very beautiful and cute.
✓ Yes, I like it, but in moderation because they are very beautiful and cute.
The phrase 'moderation' needs a preposition 'in' to form the common expression 'in moderation'. Use 'in moderation' to indicate doing something to a limited extent. Suggestion: say 'in moderation' when limiting frequency or extent.
× The century is very nice and wonderful.
✓ The scenery is very nice and wonderful.
'Century' is a wrong word here; the correct noun to refer to views or landscapes is 'scenery'. This is a lexical error rather than grammar. Suggestion: use 'scenery' or 'view' when talking about visual landscapes.
× No, not much, because the city is better, because there is development and there is a lot of renewal and is on countryside, there is little or no development.
✓ No, not much, because the city is better: there is development and a lot of renewal, whereas in the countryside there is little or no development.
Problems include missing subject before 'is on countryside' and wrong article 'the' before 'countryside'. Replaced with clearer contrast 'whereas in the countryside'. Also combined clauses and adjusted articles for grammaticality.
× Yes, of course, because I think that there will be a new environment, broader thinking grows, speaking and learning in other countries.
✓ Yes, of course, because I think there will be a new environment, broader thinking will develop, and opportunities to speak and learn in other countries.
Several tense and verb form issues: use 'will develop' to match future idea 'there will be'. Also 'speaking and learning' lacked a verb and connection; adding 'opportunities to' makes the sentence grammatical. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and use auxiliary verbs for future ideas.
× For example, I when, for example, when I went to Turkey, my opinion about them changed a lot.
✓ For example, when I went to Turkey, my opinion of it changed a lot.
Redundant words ('I when, for example, when') were removed. Use 'opinion of it' or 'opinion about Turkey' rather than 'opinion about them' because 'Turkey' is singular. 'Changed' is correct past tense, but pronoun agreement was wrong. Suggestion: simplify the clause order and use correct pronoun reference.