Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (articles, verb forms), avoid redundancy, and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I bought a camera five years ago, and although I’m not a professional, I take photos whenever I see a scene that looks unique. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the river because the changing colours make each shot different.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference sentence, then support with specific reasons and a linking word. Fix grammar (plural/singular, articles) and avoid vague phrases like "very pleasant to eyes."

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because they offer more natural variety. For instance, rural landscapes include farm fields, wildlife and open skies, which create more interesting photo opportunities than just tall buildings in a city.

Gợi ý: Answer directly whether you prefer views at home or abroad, then give clear, grammatically correct supporting details. Avoid fillers (uh) and unclear words like "fixtures." Use linking words and specific examples of landscapes.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because India is very diverse. For example, we have Himalayan mountains in the north, deserts in Rajasthan, long coastlines by the ocean and fertile plateaus, so I can photograph many different landscapes without travelling abroad.

× I bought camera five years ago and I'm not a professional photographer, but I always take photographs with it whenever I see your scenery, which is different and have a unique.

✓ I bought a camera five years ago, and I'm not a professional photographer, but I always take photographs with it whenever I see a scene that is different and unique.

Missing article before 'camera' and incorrect use of 'your scenery' and 'have a unique'. Add the indefinite article 'a' before 'camera'. Replace 'your scenery' (incorrect pronoun) with 'a scene' and restructure clause to 'that is different and unique' to use correct adjective form and subject-verb agreement. (Grammar problem type ID: 22)

× I bought camera five years ago and I'm not a professional photographer, but I always take photographs with it whenever I see your scenery, which is different and have a unique.

✓ I bought a camera five years ago, and I'm not a professional photographer, but I always take photographs with it whenever I see a scene that is different and unique.

The relative clause 'which is different and have a unique' mixes singular/plural verb forms. The subject 'scene' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' and adjectives 'different and unique' should modify the noun. Change 'have a unique' to 'is unique' or 'that is unique' for correct agreement. (Grammar problem type ID: 27)

× I bought camera five years ago and I'm not a professional photographer, but I always take photographs with it whenever I see your scenery, which is different and have a unique.

✓ I bought a camera five years ago, and I'm not a professional photographer, but I always take photographs with it whenever I see a scene that is different and unique.

The use of 'your scenery' is inappropriate in this context; reference should be general, so use 'a scene' or 'scenery' without 'your'. This makes the sentence natural and avoids addressing the examiner directly. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× Urban areas only have tall buildings but rural areas are more photogenic as they have different animals and also there are different type of sceneries of farm lands which are very pleasant to eyes.

✓ Urban areas only have tall buildings, but rural areas are more photogenic because they have different animals and there are different types of scenery on farmlands, which are very pleasant to the eyes.

Errors: 'different type' should be plural 'different types'; 'sceneries' is usually 'scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenes'; 'farm lands' should be 'farmlands' or 'farmland'; 'pleasant to eyes' needs article 'the eyes'. Make plural/singular forms consistent. (Grammar problem type ID: 1)

× Urban areas only have tall buildings but rural areas are more photogenic as they have different animals and also there are different type of sceneries of farm lands which are very pleasant to eyes.

✓ Urban areas only have tall buildings, but rural areas are more photogenic because they have different animals and there are different types of scenery on farmlands, which are very pleasant to the eyes.

Preposition and phrasing issues: use 'on farmlands' instead of 'of farm lands' and include 'to the eyes' rather than 'to eyes'. These changes make the sentence idiomatic. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)

× Urban areas only have tall buildings but rural areas are more photogenic as they have different animals and also there are different type of sceneries of farm lands which are very pleasant to eyes.

✓ Urban areas only have tall buildings, but rural areas are more photogenic because they have different animals and there are different types of scenery on farmlands, which are very pleasant to the eyes.

Add or adjust articles: use 'different types' (no article needed) and 'the eyes' for the fixed expression. 'Farmlands' is a countable plural or 'farmland' uncountable; choose 'farmlands' here. (Grammar problem type ID: 22)

× Uh, I live in India and it is widely diverse. It have different, it has different natures and there are different type of geographical areas like mountains, deserts, uh. Ocean and plateaus so I can have fixtures.

✓ I live in India, and it is very diverse. It has different landscapes and various geographical areas like mountains, deserts, oceans, and plateaus, so I can take many photos.

Multiple issues: 'It have' is incorrect; singular 'it' requires 'has' (subject-verb agreement). 'Different natures' is awkward — use 'different landscapes' or 'natural features'. 'Different type' should be 'different types' or 'various'. 'Ocean' should be plural 'oceans' to match list or 'the ocean' singular; better 'oceans'. 'I can have fixtures' is unclear; likely means 'I can take many photos'. Correct verbs and noun forms for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 27)