Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と文法の誤り（例："to taking" → "to take"、冠詞や語順の欠如）を直し、話の構成を明確にしてください。最初に簡潔な主題文を言い、その後で具体例を1つだけ示し、数字や結果をはっきり述べると良いです。また不要な反復を避け、文を短く保つことで自然さが増します。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, when I visited Mount Hakodate, I took about 100 photos and later compared them to choose the best shots.

Gợi ý: 文法（比較表現や冠詞）と語彙選択を改善してください。比較をする際は"prefer X to Y"や"I like X better than Y"のような明確な構造を使い、理由は1〜2点に絞って具体例を添えると説得力が増します。つなぎ言葉（because, therefore, for example）を適切に使って論理の流れを作ってください。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views to rural ones because cities have diverse buildings and changing skylines. For example, the variety of architecture in a city gives me more interesting subjects to photograph.

Gợi ý: 表現の正確さ（"you"は不要、"prefer views in Japan to those in other countries"など）と理由の具体化を心がけてください。なぜ日本の風景が好きなのか（伝統的な建物、季節の風景、文化的背景など）を1〜2点に絞り、比較や個人的な経験を加えるとよいです。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in Japan to those in other countries because I enjoy traditional scenery such as shrines and old streets. Having grown up there, I can compare how places have changed over time, which makes photographing them more meaningful.

× I like to taking pictures different views.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views.

This sentence has a problem with verb form and preposition use. The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'taking' (not the infinitive 'to taking'). Also, the noun phrase needs the preposition 'of' to link 'pictures' and 'different views' ('pictures of different views'). Improve by remembering after 'like' use gerund and include necessary prepositions: 'like taking pictures of...'.

× For example when I went to the UMM mountain of Hakodate I took a lot of photos about 100.

✓ For example, when I went to Mount Hakodate I took about 100 photos.

This sentence contains issues with word order and word choice. 'UMM mountain of Hakodate' is incorrect—use 'Mount Hakodate' or 'Hakodate Mountain'. Also 'took a lot of photos about 100' has awkward order; place 'about 100' before 'photos'. Ensure commas after introductory phrases. Suggestion: 'For example, when I went to Mount Hakodate I took about 100 photos.'

× So I compared all the them and I can find.

✓ So I compared all of them and I could find some differences.

This sentence has subject-verb agreement and sentence structure problems. 'all the them' is ungrammatical; use 'all of them'. 'I can find' does not fit the past context set by 'compared'—use past tense 'could find'. Also the verb needs an object; likely 'some differences' or 'which one I liked'. Improve by matching tense and providing a clear object: 'I compared all of them and I could find some differences.'

× From my perspective the view is urban area better than rural air because there are a lot of buildings so also there are changes.

✓ From my perspective, urban views are better than rural ones because there are a lot of buildings and more variety.

This sentence has several tense and word choice issues. 'the view is urban area better than rural air' is ungrammatical; use plural 'urban views' and 'rural ones'. 'rural air' is wrong; 'rural ones' or 'rural views' is correct. 'so also there are changes' is awkward—use 'and more variety' or 'and more changes'. Also add comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: 'From my perspective, urban views are better than rural ones because there are a lot of buildings and more variety.'

× So I see urban area is better than taking photo in the area.

✓ So I think urban areas are better places to take photos.

This sentence has sentence structure and word choice problems. 'I see urban area is better than taking photo in the area' mixes ideas and forms. Use 'I think' or 'I believe', plural 'urban areas', and express purpose: 'better places to take photos'. Suggestion: 'So I think urban areas are better places to take photos.'

× I prefer you in Japan compared to in other countries because there are traditional ones and I used to see it so I can compare the past and nowadays, so I like it.

✓ I prefer Japan to other countries because it has many traditional places that I used to see, so I can compare the past and the present.

This sentence misuses pronouns and comparison structure. 'I prefer you in Japan' wrongly uses 'you' instead of 'Japan' and 'prefer ... compared to' is less natural than 'prefer X to Y'. 'there are traditional ones' is vague; use 'it has many traditional places'. 'I used to see it' is unclear—'used to see' should refer to 'places'. 'nowadays' should be 'the present' to contrast with 'the past'. Improve by correcting pronouns, comparison form, and clarifying references: 'I prefer Japan to other countries because it has many traditional places that I used to see, so I can compare the past and the present.'