Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and more natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I especially like photographing landscapes when I travel because it helps me preserve memories and recall details about the places I visited. For example, photos remind me of the light and colors of a sunset long after the trip.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with specific reasons and a linking word. Correct grammar and avoid repetition (e.g., "spare my spare time"). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones. Because I grew up in Shanghai, I find countryside scenery relaxing and peaceful, and it helps me escape the city’s constant noise and fast pace.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give specific reasons and correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" or "since" and add one concrete example to show you’ve explored or want to explore specific regions.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because China is vast and culturally diverse. For example, I want to visit Yunnan for its dramatic mountains and Guangxi for its karst landscapes, so I still have many places at home to explore.

× Absolutely, I like capture and beautiful scenery whenever I travel and because I enjoy taking pictures to preserve my memories or places and it can helps me to remember a lot of.

✓ Absolutely, I like capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel because I enjoy taking pictures to preserve my memories of places and it helps me remember a lot.

Multiple errors: 'like capture' needs gerund after like when expressing preference for an action -> 'like capturing' (Type 8). 'and beautiful scenery' is extra conjunction; remove 'and' to join correctly. 'because' should connect reasons; keep single 'because'. 'preserve my memories or places' is wrong preposition/structure -> 'memories of places' (Type 11). 'it can helps' mixes modal and third person singular -> use 'it helps' (Type 2 and Type 4). Suggestions: use 'like' + verb-ing, use 'memories of', and use correct verb agreement with third person singular ('helps') or omit 'can' if not needed.

× Personally I prefer the views in rural areas 'cause I was born in Shanghai so I always living a fast-paced environment so I really enjoy to spare my spare time in.

✓ Personally, I prefer views in rural areas because I was born in Shanghai, so I am used to living in a fast-paced environment and I really enjoy spending my free time there.

'always living' is incorrect continuous use for habitual state; use 'am used to living' or 'have always lived' (Type 6). 'I really enjoy to spare my spare time in' has two issues: 'enjoy' requires verb-ing -> 'enjoy spending' (Type 8), and 'spare my spare time' is repetitive; use 'my free time' and include location 'there'. Also replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because' and add commas for clarity. Suggestions: use correct present tense forms for habitual states and 'enjoy' + -ing.

× And I prefer the views in my own country because, you know, China is a very big country with different kinds kind of cultures.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because China is a very large country with many different kinds of cultures.

'very big' is acceptable but 'large' is more natural; main error is 'different kinds kind of cultures' which is repetitive and ungrammatical -> 'many different kinds of cultures' or 'many different cultures' (Type 13). Remove filler 'you know' for formality. Suggestion: simplify phrase to 'many different kinds of cultures' or 'many different cultures'.

× So I many places I haven't explore it and I like to visit them.

✓ There are many places I haven't explored yet, and I would like to visit them.

Sentence has word order and verb form issues: 'So I many places I haven't explore it' is missing a verb and subject placement; use introductory 'There are many places' (Type 3 and Type 26). 'haven't explore' needs past participle 'explored' after 'have' (Type 9). 'explore it' incorrectly uses object pronoun; refer to 'places' with 'them' later (Type 12). 'I like to visit them' is acceptable but 'I would like to visit them' is more natural for future intention (Type 7). Suggestions: use 'There are many places I haven't explored yet' and 'I would like to visit them'.