Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and word choice errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g., 'different views' and 'sceneries' overlap), and correct noun/verb forms and agreement. Use one or two specific examples of scenes you enjoy and a linking word to connect ideas. Keep to under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — I enjoy photographing different views. Although I’m not a professional, photography helps me capture meaningful moments and beautiful scenery. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain ridges because their colors and shapes are striking, and they make me feel inspired.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, verb tenses, and clarity. Use a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'in contrast'). Avoid filler sounds and correct noun forms and agreement ('urban landscapes are crowded', 'they make me feel relaxed'). Limit to 3–4 sentences and provide a concrete example of a rural scene.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because urban landscapes are often crowded and noisy. In contrast, the open fields and forests in the countryside feel peaceful and help me relax. For instance, I enjoy photographing misty mornings in small villages where the light and silence create a calm atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Correct pronoun agreement and reduce hesitation. Start with a direct statement, then give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example'). Avoid vague phrases like 'and so on' and replace with a concrete example or memory to make the response more vivid and specific.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they give me a strong sense of belonging. For example, walking along the river near my hometown reminds me of childhood bike rides, and the familiar architecture often evokes scenes from local films I watched growing up.

× I especially like photographing landscapes and some city space, which are moving and makes me feel confident.

✓ I especially like photographing landscapes and some urban spaces, which are moving and make me feel confident.

Original has mixed singular/plural and verb agreement problems: 'city space' is unidiomatic and should be 'urban spaces' (plural) and the relative clause subject is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also 'moving' is acceptable as an adjective here. Suggest using 'urban spaces' for natural collocation and ensure plural verbs match plural subjects.

× I would prefer views in rural areas to the extent of views, because urban landscape was crowded, buildings and skyscrapers often filled, hectic and made me feel stressful.

✓ I prefer rural views because urban landscapes are crowded; buildings and skyscrapers often fill the space, are hectic, and make me feel stressed.

Multiple plural/singular and word-choice errors: 'views in rural areas to the extent of views' is unclear and unnecessary; simplify to 'rural views'. 'urban landscape was crowded' mixes singular with past tense; use plural 'urban landscapes are crowded' to match general statement and present tense. 'buildings and skyscrapers often filled' needs an object or passive; better: 'often fill the space'. 'made me feel stressful' is incorrect because people feel stressed (adjective) or feel stress (noun), so use 'make me feel stressed'. Keep tense consistent (present simple) when describing preferences.

× Uh, But in contrast, this open space and natural scenery in the countryside M make me feel peaceful and unwind.

✓ But in contrast, the open spaces and natural scenery in the countryside make me feel peaceful and help me unwind.

Errors: unnecessary 'this' and capital 'M' are incorrect; use 'the open spaces' or 'open space' depending on meaning. 'make me feel peaceful and unwind' incorrectly mixes a verb phrase with an object; better to say 'make me feel peaceful and help me unwind' or 'make me feel peaceful and relaxed'. Also correct subject-verb agreement: plural 'spaces' with 'make'.

× I prefer views in my own country actually.

✓ I actually prefer views in my own country.

Word order and emphasis: placing 'actually' after the verb is less natural. Moving 'actually' before the verb clarifies meaning. This is a stylistic/pronoun placement issue rather than strictly grammatical, but improves natural English.

× I think every country has their unique city space and lifestyles and sceneries.

✓ I think every country has its unique urban spaces, lifestyles, and scenery.

Pronoun agreement: 'every country' is singular, so use the singular possessive pronoun 'its', not 'their'. Also 'city space' is unidiomatic; 'urban spaces' is better. 'sceneries' is rarely used; 'scenery' is uncountable.

× But when I look at familiar landscape at my own country, I feel strong sense of, uh, belonging because they remind me of some childhood memories and some movie moments and so on.

✓ But when I look at familiar landscapes in my own country, I feel a strong sense of belonging because they remind me of some childhood memories and moments from movies.

Multiple issues: 'familiar landscape' should be plural 'familiar landscapes' if referring to multiple scenes. Preposition 'at my own country' is incorrect; use 'in my own country'. Missing article before 'strong sense' — add 'a'. 'they' refers to 'landscapes' (plural) so is acceptable; rephrase 'some movie moments' to 'moments from movies' for naturalness. Ensure noun-verb and article usage are correct.