Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I really like taking pictures of different views because it can helps me to remember what I visit and I also like to share the pictures with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
For me, I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas feels more beautiful than urban areas. The nature let me relax.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I think I like my country views because my country is a big one, has different kinds of views. I can see them everywhere.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: Improve grammar (remove extra auxiliary, correct verb forms), tighten phrasing to be more natural and avoid redundancy, and add one specific detail to support the reason. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I love photographing different views. It helps me remember places I visit, and I often share the best shots with friends on social media. For example, I recently photographed a waterfall during a trip and the photos brought back the sounds and atmosphere when I looked at them later.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Correct subject-verb agreement and simplify wording; add a linking phrase and a concrete example of what you find relaxing in rural views. Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because they feel more peaceful and natural than cities. For instance, looking at rolling hills and rivers helps me relax after a busy week.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent by combining clauses correctly and adding a specific example of the variety you enjoy. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like "everywhere."
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it is large and offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, I can find mountains in the north, beaches in the south, and forests inland, so I rarely run out of new places to photograph.
× Absolutely, I really like taking pictures of different views because it can helps me to remember what I visit and I also like to share the pictures with my friends.
✓ Absolutely, I really like taking pictures of different views because it can help me to remember what I visit and I also like to share the pictures with my friends.
The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not a third-person singular form. 'Can helps' is incorrect; use 'can help'. Suggestion: after modals (can, could, will, should, etc.) always use the base verb form (help, go, see).
× For me, I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas feels more beautiful than urban areas.
✓ For me, I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas feel more beautiful than urban areas.
The subject 'rural areas' is plural, so the verb must be plural: 'feel' not 'feels'. This is a subject-verb agreement error for third person plural. Suggestion: identify the subject number (singular/plural) and choose the matching verb form (feels for singular, feel for plural).
× The nature let me relax.
✓ Nature lets me relax.
'The nature' is unnatural in general statements about the natural environment; use the uncountable noun 'nature' without 'the'. Also the verb must agree with singular uncountable 'nature': use 'lets' not 'let'. Suggestion: omit 'the' with general nouns like 'nature' and match verb to subject ('nature lets').
× I think I like my country views because my country is a big one, has different kinds of views.
✓ I think I like the views in my country because it is a large country with many different kinds of scenery.
The original sentence has awkward structure and missing conjunction for the second clause ('has different kinds of views' lacks a subject). Also 'big one' is informal; 'large country' is clearer. Suggestion: provide a clear subject for each clause and use natural collocations ('views in my country', 'scenery', 'many different kinds').
× I can see them everywhere.
✓ I can see them everywhere.
This sentence is grammatically acceptable; 'them' correctly refers to plural 'views' and matches context. No correction needed. Suggestion: None.