Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like ticket pictures umm different views because I think different landscapes have a different feels Give me uh, for example, when I take a picture in front of the mountain, I feel the peaceful, but if I stay top the mountain, I feel very happy and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I like ticket photos in rural rural areas because I live in a city. I don't like view some higher building. I like view mountains. So I wanna go to the rural rural areas.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer view my countries, you know, I, my country is very big, so they have a different landscapes. I just, I just have been to, uh, a few of cities. A lot of cities I didn't view there, so I wanna view some.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和用词需要更地道、简洁,避免重复与口头语。回答要有主题句并用1–2个支持细节扩展,且控制在5句内。注意冠词、动词形式和固定搭配(如 take pictures, feel peaceful/feel happy/on top of the mountain)。可以通过连接词(for example, but, because)让表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each landscape gives a distinct feeling. For example, when I photograph a mountain from below, I feel peaceful and calm, but when I reach the top, I feel excited and very happy. Photography helps me remember those emotions.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 要直接回答问题并给出具体原因和一两个细节,避免重复词(如 "rural rural")和不完整句子。使用正确搭配(prefer X to Y, tall buildings, mountain views)。尽量用连词(because, so, therefore)连接理由与结果。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I live in a busy city and enjoy natural scenery. For instance, I like photographing mountains and fields rather than tall buildings, so I often travel to the countryside to take pictures.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流利并使用正确语法(I prefer views in my country; my country is very large; different landscapes)。给出具体理由并避免重复。可以提到想去的具体类型地点或城市作为支持细节。句子控制在3–4句内更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it is very large and offers diverse landscapes. I have only visited a few cities, so there are many places I haven't seen yet. I want to explore different regions and photograph mountains, coasts, and historic towns.
× Yes, I like ticket pictures umm different views because I think different landscapes have a different feels Give me uh, for example, when I take a picture in front of the mountain, I feel the peaceful, but if I stay top the mountain, I feel very happy and.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I think different landscapes have different feelings. For example, when I take a picture in front of a mountain, I feel peaceful, but if I am on the top of the mountain, I feel very happy.
本句有多处需要使用动名词和正确名词形式:"like ticket pictures" 应为 "like taking pictures"(动词短语 like 后常接动名词 taking 表示喜欢做某事);"different landscapes have a different feels" 中 feelings 应为复数名词且不应加 a;"Give me uh, for example" 用法不自然,改为 "For example";"in front of the mountain" 与 "on the top of the mountain" 语义更恰当,且原句缺少系动词,改为 "I am on the top"。建议:学习 like 后接 V-ing,用复数名词表示可数概念的复数形式,并注意完整句子结构。
× I like ticket photos in rural rural areas because I live in a city. I don't like view some higher building. I like view mountains. So I wanna go to the rural rural areas.
✓ I like taking photos in rural areas because I live in a city. I don't like seeing tall buildings. I prefer views of mountains. So I want to go to rural areas.
句中有多处单复数和词形错误:"ticket photos" 应为 "taking photos"(同上动名词用法),重复的 "rural rural" 去掉一个;"view some higher building" 中 building 应为复数 buildings 且动词搭配应为 see 或 prefer seeing;"view mountains" 更自然为 "views of mountains"。此外口语缩写 "wanna" 写成正式 "want to"。建议:注意名词单复数一致,使用正确动词搭配和固定短语(views of)。
× I prefer view my countries, you know, I, my country is very big, so they have a different landscapes. I just, I just have been to, uh, a few of cities. A lot of cities I didn't view there, so I wanna view some.
✓ I prefer views in my country. My country is very big, so it has different landscapes. I have only been to a few cities. There are many cities I haven't visited yet, so I want to visit some more.
本段时态与主谓一致有问题:"prefer view my countries" 应为 "prefer views in my country";country 是单数,故后文应为 "it has" 而不是 "they have";"I just have been to a few of cities" 时态与介词用法错误,正确为现在完成时 "I have only been to a few cities";"A lot of cities I didn't view there" 应改为 "There are many cities I haven't visited yet"(现在完成时表示至今未去过)。建议:注意主语与动词的一致(单复数),使用现在完成时描述到目前为止的经历,并用正确动词(visit 而非 view 表示参观)。