Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答有主题句，但存在重复、语法和搭配错误，且句子冗长。建议用一到两句直接表达喜好，避免重复，用更自然的词汇和正确结构；可加一两个具体细节说明原因。比如说明喜欢拍哪类景色或用什么设备。注意动词搭配（take photos）、形容词和情感表达的常用搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of different views because it helps me relax and notice small details. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and countryside fields in the morning to capture different moods.

Gợi ý: 回答明确但表达不够地道，存在词汇搭配问题（e.g. 'viewpoints shows a structure's beauty' 和 'coordination between humans and nature'）。建议使用更自然的比较结构，加入连接词使句子更连贯，并举例说明各自的吸引力。保持句子简短最多三句。

Ví dụ: I enjoy both, because urban views show architectural beauty and energy, while rural views offer peaceful natural scenery. For example, I like photographing modern skyscrapers at night and quiet lakeside fields in the morning.

Gợi ý: 回答表达重复且比较句型错误（'very splendid and outstanding than' 不正确）。建议直接给出立场并用具体理由支持，避免笼统的形容词。可以说明某些本国景点的独特性、文化联系或情感原因，并用比较句型正确表达。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they have unique landscapes and cultural features that I know well. For instance, the traditional mountain terraces near my hometown look more meaningful to me than foreign scenery because of the local history and memories.

× Of course, I'm very keen on the taking photos of different views because it is very attractive to me for me to take pictures of different views.

✓ Of course, I'm very keen on taking photos of different views because it is very attractive to me to take pictures of different views.

句中出现了多余的定冠词“the”和重复的短语“for me”。“keen on”后应接动名词“taking”，而不是“the taking”。同时句子末尾使用了重复结构，应删去多余部分，保持表达简洁。建议把“the taking photos”改为“taking photos”，并去掉一个“for me”。

× It makes me very relaxing and very delighted.

✓ It makes me very relaxed and very delighted.

“relaxing”是现在分词，表示使人放松的事物（令人放松的），而说话人想表达自身感受应使用形容词“relaxed”。因此应用“relaxed”来描述人的感觉。

× Actually, I enjoy them both because the urban areas for viewpoints shows a structure's beauty and in the rural areas I can feel the coordination between humans and nature.

✓ Actually, I enjoy both because urban areas show the beauty of architecture, and in rural areas I can feel the harmony between humans and nature.

原句结构混乱：不需要“the urban areas for viewpoints”，且主谓不一致（shows 与复数主语不匹配）。“a structure's beauty”表达不自然，改为“the beauty of architecture”。同时用连词连接两部分，并把“coordination”换成更自然的“harmony”。注意主谓一致，保持并列句结构清晰。

× I prefer the views in my own country rather than in other countries because I think the view in my own country is very splendid and outstanding than other countries.

✓ I prefer the views in my own country to those in other countries because I think the views in my own country are more splendid and outstanding than those in other countries.

比较结构使用不当：英语中常用“prefer A to B”而不是“prefer A rather than B”。且比较句中应使用“more ... than”来比较，且要比较相同的名词（views 对 views，不能直接用 countries）。因此用“those”代替前文名词，并保持主谓一致（views ... are）。