Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Of course, I like taking photos of different views when we take photos. With them, we will take seriously of them and. Look them. More. Seriously?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Of course, I prefer rural areas because I live in the city and see the city views everyday. The rules skills can make me relax and feel me. Feel pleasantly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, I pray for Wales in other countries. Because. Other countries have different views. From our countries. Our country have some. Europe bills. We can see every.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、连贯并直接回应问题。建议先以一句话明确回答(例如“Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views”),然后用1–2句具体说明原因或例子,注意避免重复和语法错误,并使用连接词如“because”或“so”来保持流畅。练习时可把句子限制在不超过5句内并朗读纠正断句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture different moods and memories. For example, I often photograph city skylines at sunset and quiet countryside scenes in the morning, which help me relax and remember the moment.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并纠正语法错误。先给出明确偏好(例如“I prefer rural areas”),然后用一两个具体理由支持(例如宁静、自然风景让人放松),使用连接词如“because”或“so”。避免无意义的词汇(如“rules skills”)。可练习把复杂想法拆成简单句,再用连接词连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and more peaceful than the city. Living in a busy city, I like to escape to the countryside where fresh air and open spaces help me relax.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏条理且有语法与词汇错误。先直接回答(例如“I prefer views in other countries”或“I like both”),然后说明具体原因并给出例子。避免使用错误词汇(如“pray for Wales”应为“I’d like to visit Wales”或类似表述),并用连接词如“for example”或“because”组织细节。练习时先写出要点再口头复述。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because different landscapes and architecture can be very inspiring. For example, I would love to visit Wales to see its dramatic coastlines and historic stone buildings, which are quite different from what I see at home.
× Of course, I like taking photos of different views when we take photos. With them, we will take seriously of them and. Look them. More. Seriously?
✓ Of course, I like taking photos of different views when I take photos. I take them seriously and look at them more carefully.
句子结构混乱,包含不完整的短语和多余或错误的代词用法(例如“we take photos”与说话者的陈述不一致,“With them, we will take seriously of them and. Look them. More. Seriously?”为碎片句)。应合并为完整句并使用一致的主语(I)。建议练习将碎句合并为完整句,确保主语一致并使用恰当的动词短语(例如“take them seriously”,“look at them carefully”)。
× Of course, I prefer rural areas because I live in the city and see the city views everyday. The rules skills can make me relax and feel me. Feel pleasantly.
✓ Of course, I prefer rural areas because I live in the city and see the city views every day. The rural scenery helps me relax and makes me feel pleasant.
存在现在时使用不当与词语选择错误。原句中“see the city views everyday”时态可用一般现在,但“everyday”应写成两个词“every day”。“The rules skills”是拼写/词汇错误,应为“rural scenery”或“rural areas”;“can make me relax and feel me”中“feel me”不符合英语搭配,应为“make me feel pleasant”。建议学习常见名词搭配(collocations),并注意“every day”与“everyday”的区别。
× Our country have some. Europe bills. We can see every.
✓ Our country has some old European buildings that we can see everywhere.
主谓不一致:主语“Our country”是单数,应使用动词“has”而不是“have”。另外,句子不完整且“Europe bills”拼写和词语选择错误,应为“European buildings”,并将碎句合并成完整句。建议复习主谓一致的规则并使用完整句表达思想。
× Well, I pray for Wales in other countries. Because. Other countries have different views. From our countries.
✓ Well, I prefer Wales and other foreign countries because they have different views from our country.
句子结构和用词错误:原句“We pray for Wales”含义不明且不符合意思,应为“I prefer Wales”或“I would like to visit Wales”。短句碎片(Because. Other countries have different views. From our countries.)应合并为完整句并调整语序。建议练习将理由用完整句连接,避免使用短句碎片。
× With them, we will take seriously of them and.
✓ I take my photos seriously and pay attention to them.
代词使用不当且冗余:“With them”与后半句代词重复使用显得多余且不通顺。应明确主语并使用合适的代词和动词短语(如“pay attention to them”)。建议练习代词的指代清晰性,避免重复和不必要的短语。