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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yeah, sure I do. I like, I like, I like photographing different scenery.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I think I like cities because cities have so many different interesting architectures and modern buildings.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

You know, I love different cultures and different styles, architectures, so I like scenery of the other countries.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然但重复较多,句子过于简短且信息量有限。建议去掉重复词,直接给出主题句并补充1-2个具体细节(比如你拍摄的场景类型、拍照的原因或使用的设备)。使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different kinds of scenery, especially landscapes and city skylines, because I like capturing light and atmosphere. For example, I often go out at sunrise to photograph the changing colors of the sky.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答清晰但较直白,可以通过加入对比和具体细节来增强说服力。例如说明喜欢城市的哪些建筑特点,或者举一个你最喜欢的城市景观作例子,并使用连接词如“because”或“however”。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer a wide variety of architectural styles and modern buildings that create dynamic visuals. For instance, I love photographing glass skyscrapers at dusk because their reflections and lights look dramatic.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点但开头口语化词汇("You know")不必要且略显不正式。建议直接陈述观点并补充具体原因和例子,比如你特别喜欢哪些国家的建筑风格或文化景观,使用连接词如“because”或“for example”。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often feature unique cultural styles and architectures I haven't seen at home. For example, I enjoy photographing historic European streets and colorful markets in Southeast Asia because they offer distinct textures and atmospheres.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I like, I like, I like photographing different scenery.

I like photographing different scenes.

句中使用了“scenery” (不可数名词)与“different”搭配不自然,且口语中重复“I like”可简化。原句重复式“ I like, I like, I like”属于口语填充,不是标准书面表达。将“scenery”换为复数可数名词“scenes”更符合“different”的用法,同时保持动名词“photographing”作为喜欢的活动,句子结构正确。建议:减少不必要的重复,使用“scenes”或保持“different scenery”但不加复数,当需要强调多种不同画面时用“different scenes”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× I think I like cities because cities have so many different interesting architectures and modern buildings.

I think I like cities because cities have so many different and interesting buildings and pieces of architecture.

“architectures”通常不用于复数形式来指建筑物,英语中更常用“architecture”作不可数名词(指建筑风格或学科),或用“buildings”/“pieces of architecture”指具体建筑。原句里“different interesting architectures and modern buildings”词序和搭配也略显冗余。建议改为“different and interesting buildings”或“different pieces of architecture and modern buildings”。注意形容词顺序可用“different and interesting”或“interesting and different”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× You know, I love different cultures and different styles, architectures, so I like scenery of the other countries.

You know, I love different cultures, styles, and architectures, so I like the scenery of other countries.

“scenery of the other countries”中定冠词和“other countries”搭配不自然。一般说法为“the scenery of other countries”或直接“scenery in other countries”。此外“architectures”同样不常用复数,改为“architectures”作为集合时可接受,但更自然是“architecture”或“buildings”。建议将短语整理为“cultures, styles, and architecture”或“cultures, styles, and buildings”,并使用“the scenery of other countries”或“scenery in other countries”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
ModernPresent-day; Fashionable
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