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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I don't really like taking photos of different views because I'm not good at finding right angle and composing a right shoot. So if I want to take a decent photo I usually ask my parents or friends to help me.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer rural areas because I think countryside has more much more wild animals such as sheep, deer and cows. It's very interesting and fascinating and in rural area I can see a lot of different.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

I prefer wheels in my country because I have lived there for nearly 25 years. Everything are familiar to me. I think I want to see some familiar things and which makes me feel comfortable and.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 用更自然、简洁且语法正确的表达来回答。注意句子结构和词汇搭配(例如:right angle → the right angle;composing a right shoot → composing a good shot)。保持回答在最多五句内,先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持,并使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。可以给出一个简短的例子来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: No, I don't really enjoy taking photos of different views because I struggle with finding the right angle and composing a good shot. For that reason, I usually ask my parents or friends to take pictures for me. For example, when we visited the park last month, my sister positioned me and adjusted the camera so the photo looked much better.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答需更准确且语法正确。避免重复(例如“more much more”),使用正确的短语(the countryside;in rural areas)。提供具体细节说明为什么喜欢乡村景色(例如安静、自然风光、野生动物),并用连接词串联观点。完成未完成的句子,避免模糊表述。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because the countryside is quieter and full of natural scenery. There are more animals like sheep, deer and cows, which I find fascinating. Also, rural views offer open fields and peaceful walking paths, which help me relax.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 注意词汇和句子完整性。纠正明显错误(wheels → views;Everything are → Everything is)。先直接回答(I prefer views in my own country),然后给出具体原因并补充例子或比较。保持语句完整,避免以“and”或“which”结尾。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I have lived here for nearly 25 years and everything feels familiar. Familiar landscapes and cultural sights make me feel comfortable and nostalgic. For instance, visiting the countryside where I grew up always brings back good memories.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of articles

× To be honest, I don't really like taking photos of different views because I'm not good at finding right angle and composing a right shoot.

To be honest, I don't really like taking photos of different views because I'm not good at finding the right angle and composing a good shot.

句中缺少定冠词“the”与不正确的名词用法。英语中“right angle”在此语境应使用定冠词“the right angle”;“shoot”用作名词不常见且不自然,应使用“shot”。此外“a right shoot”中的不定冠词搭配不当,应改为“a good shot”。建议:遇到特指的名词使用定冠词the;选择常用搭配(collocations),例如“find the right angle”、“compose a shot”。

Third person singular issue

× So if I want to take a decent photo I usually ask my parents or friends to help me.

So if I want to take a decent photo I usually ask my parents or friends to help me.

句子本身语法正确。本条仅是核对第三人称单数问题,原句中没有第三人称单数动词错误,因此无需修改。建议:继续注意动词与主语的一致性。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I prefer rural areas because I think countryside has more much more wild animals such as sheep, deer and cows.

I prefer rural areas because I think the countryside has many more wild animals such as sheep, deer and cows.

原句中“more much more”是冗余错误,且“countryside”在特指乡村时应加定冠词“the”。“many more”是正确的表达量的方式。建议:避免重复使用程度副词,常用搭配为“many more”或“much more”(用于不可数名词)。

Sentence structure errors

× It's very interesting and fascinating and in rural area I can see a lot of different.

It's very interesting and fascinating, and in rural areas I can see a lot of different animals.

原句结构不完整,结尾“a lot of different”缺少名词补足;“rural area”应使用复数或加定冠词“the”以与语境匹配。建议:保证“different”后跟具体名词(如animals/things),并使单复数和冠词一致,例如“in rural areas”或“in the rural area”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer wheels in my country because I have lived there for nearly 25 years.

I prefer living in my country because I have lived there for nearly 25 years.

原句中“wheels”显然是拼写或用词错误,应为“living”(居住/生活)或“places”。根据上下文应为“living in my country”。建议:写作时检查是否为拼写错误或误用同音词,确保用词与语境一致。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Everything are familiar to me.

Everything is familiar to me.

“Everything”作为主语是单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”,不能用“are”。建议:确定不定代词(everything, everyone, anything等)为单数并使用单数动词。

Sentence structure errors

× I think I want to see some familiar things and which makes me feel comfortable and.

I think I want to see some familiar things, which makes me feel comfortable.

原句中“and which makes me feel comfortable and.”结构不完整,多余连词“and”应去掉,句子末尾多余“and”导致句子残缺。将两个分句用逗号连接并用非限制性定语从句“which makes me feel comfortable”即可。建议:避免在非限制性从句前使用多余的连词,并检查句子结尾是否完整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
InterestingAbsorbing
WildUntamed; Primitive; Uninhabited; Uncontrolled; Distraught
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