Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and simplify your sentences, use correct grammar and vocabulary, and add a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so") correctly and avoid redundant or unclear phrases. Keep answers within 3–4 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because photography helps me notice details like light, color and composition. For example, when I walk in the park or travel, I often photograph landscapes and city scenes to preserve memories and share them with friends.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons using correct vocabulary and linking words. Correct word forms (views, rural areas, streets) and improve clarity by providing one concrete example. Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscapes and greenery help me relax and feel closer to nature. For example, I enjoy scenes with rolling mountains and rivers much more than crowded streets and concrete buildings.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical topic sentence about your preference and explain why with specific, coherent details. Avoid unclear metaphors and incorrect word choices; replace with simple, meaningful phrases (e.g., "childhood memories", "emotional value"). Use a linking word like "however" correctly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they are connected to childhood memories of trips with my grandparents and have strong emotional value for me. However, I also enjoy scenery abroad for its dramatic mountain ranges and exotic beaches, such as a dark sand beach where turtles swim close to shore.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different view because photograph help me notice till I met oversize myths such as light, color and a composition.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photographs help me notice details like light, color, and composition.

The nouns 'view' and 'photograph' should be plural to match context ('different views', 'photographs'). Also 'a composition' is incorrect; use 'composition' as an uncountable noun here. The sentence was rephrased to correct plural forms and improve clarity. Suggestion: Make sure countable nouns match number (singular/plural) and use uncountable forms where appropriate.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different view because photograph help me notice till I met oversize myths such as light, color and a composition.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photographs help me notice details like light, color, and composition.

The phrase 'till I met oversize myths' is ungrammatical. It seems intended to express noticing elements; 'met' is past tense and inappropriate. Removed unclear fragment and replaced with 'notice details'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and simple phrasing to convey meaning; avoid idiomatic fragments that don't fit context.

× For example, when I work in the park or travel, I often capture landscape and city scribe to preserve memories and share them with friends.

✓ For example, when I work in the park or travel, I often capture landscapes and city scenes to preserve memories and share them with friends.

The noun 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'capture' and context. 'City scribe' is incorrect; the intended term is 'city scenes'. 'Capture' is used correctly. Preposition use is fine, but word choice needed correction. Suggestion: Choose correct nouns and collocations ('city scenes', 'capture landscapes').

× I prefer view in rural area because the open landscapes and greenery help me relax and feel close to nature.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the open landscapes and greenery help me relax and feel close to nature.

'View' should be plural 'views' and 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match the general preference. This fixes number agreement. Suggestion: Use plural forms when speaking about general preferences or categories.

× For example saying filled mountains or river comes my man much more than crowded St. and concrete buildings.

✓ For example, rolling hills or rivers appeal to me much more than crowded streets and concrete buildings.

The original sentence has many incorrect pronouns and words: 'saying filled mountains' and 'comes my man' are nonsensical. Replaced with 'rolling hills or rivers appeal to me' to express preference correctly; 'St.' expanded to 'streets'. Pronoun 'me' is used correctly in the correction. Suggestion: Use clear subjects and verbs to express preference (e.g., 'X appeals to me more than Y'). Avoid abbreviations like 'St.' in spoken description unless clear.

× I prefer review in my own country because they are tattoo childhood trip with my grandparents and therefore have strong sent me to value.

✓ I prefer scenery in my own country because it is tied to childhood trips with my grandparents and therefore has strong sentimental value for me.

'Review' is wrong; use 'scenery'. 'They are' mismatches singular 'scenery' so changed to 'it is'. 'Tattoo' is incorrect word choice; intended 'tied to'. 'Have strong sent me to value' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'has strong sentimental value for me'. This addresses plural agreement and pronoun reference. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents ('scenery' is singular: 'it') and choose appropriate verbs ('tied to').

× However, I also enjoy scenery abroad for its dramatic mountain ranges and early beaches, for example, a chocolate colored beach where turtles swim close to shore.

✓ However, I also enjoy scenery abroad for its dramatic mountain ranges and beautiful beaches; for example, a chocolate-colored beach where turtles swim close to shore.

'Early beaches' is incorrect; likely meant 'beautiful' or 'sandy' so replaced with 'beautiful beaches'. Added hyphen in 'chocolate-colored' as standard compound adjective before a noun. Preposition 'close to shore' is correct. Also adjusted punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Choose adjectives that fit meaning and use hyphenation for compound adjectives before nouns.