Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümleleri daha net ve doğru kelimelerle kur; gereksiz tekrarları azalt ve örneği tutarlı yap. Kelime seçimi (ör. "beaches" veya "views" yerine yanlışlıkla "beers" kullanımı) düzeltilmeli. Ayrıca bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp, bağlaçlarla destekleyici ayrıntılar vererek 2–4 kısa cümle kullan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they are relaxing and help me remember places. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach and upload them online. These photos remind me of the weather and mood of each visit.

Gợi ý: Daha açık ve doğru ifade kullan; 'rural' ve 'urban' tercihlerini net belirt. "rules" ve "city wheels" gibi hatalı kelimeler yerine doğru terimleri kullan. Bir tercih belirtip, nedenlerini bağlaçlarla açıklayarak spesifik örnek ver (nerelere gittiğin, ne gördüğün).

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find nature calming and it helps me relax. For example, I usually visit nearby countryside on weekends to walk through fields and take photographs. However, I also enjoy city views occasionally, especially for lively nightlife and modern architecture.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapısını düzelt ve gereksiz duraklamaları (uh) kaldır. "them" gibi belirsiz zamirleri netleştir. Kısa bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp nedenleri ve spesifik örneklerle destekle; ayrıca nadiren tercih etme durumunu bağlaçla bağla.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and are easy to reach. For instance, I often visit nearby lakes and hills where I know the best times for photography. Still, I sometimes enjoy scenic spots abroad when I travel to new places.

× Umm, well yes, I like taking pictures of different beers because they are relaxing and beautiful and for those help me remember places, uh, for example, I often say pictures that I used to see or a monsoon and I could send online.

✓ Umm, well yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they are relaxing and beautiful and they help me remember places. For example, I often take photos of scenes I have seen, like a monsoon, and I can upload them online.

The student used the word 'beers' instead of 'views' which is a vocabulary error and changed meaning; this falls under sentence structure and wrong word choice. 'For those help me remember' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'they help me remember'. 'I often say pictures' should be 'I often take pictures' (wrong verb). 'I used to see' is incorrect in this context; use present perfect 'I have seen' to refer to experiences. Suggestions: replace incorrect words with appropriate vocabulary ('views' not 'beers'), use correct verbs ('take photos', 'upload'), and use proper tense (present perfect) when referring to past experiences relevant to the present.

× Well, yes, I have the rules here because they are physical and I like nature so it's easier to relax.

✓ Well, yes, I prefer rural areas because they are peaceful and I like nature, so it's easier to relax.

'I have the rules here' is a wrong phrase; likely meant 'I prefer rural areas' or 'I have a preference for rural areas' (sentence structure and word choice error). 'Physical' is incorrect description for rural areas; 'peaceful' or 'quiet' fits. Also missing comma before coordinating clause. Suggestions: use correct expression of preference ('I prefer'), choose appropriate adjective ('peaceful'), and add punctuation for clarity.

× For example, I often go to the countryside on weekends to see fields and fields, but sometimes I also enjoy city wheels for the nightlife.

✓ For example, I often go to the countryside on weekends to see fields, but sometimes I also enjoy city life for the nightlife.

'Fields and fields' is repetitive and unnecessary; use singular 'fields' or 'vast fields'. 'City wheels' is incorrect vocabulary; the correct phrase is 'city life' when referring to urban activities and nightlife. Suggestions: avoid unnecessary repetition and choose correct collocations ('city life').

× Yes, I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and I can go very easily.

✓ Yes, I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and I can get to them easily.

'I can go very easily' is understandable but awkward; better is 'I can get to them easily' to refer to reaching places (pronoun 'them' refers to views). Also ensure clarity by specifying the object. Suggestions: use clearer verb phrases for accessibility ('get to') and include pronoun to show reference.

× For example, I often visit them nearby. UH feels to relax and take photos and I know the best times to go.

✓ For example, I often visit nearby places to relax and take photos, and I know the best times to go.

'Visit them nearby' is ungrammatical; better is 'visit nearby places'. 'UH feels to relax' is incorrect structure; 'to relax' should be part of an infinitive phrase describing purpose. Suggestions: combine clauses smoothly: 'visit nearby places to relax and take photos' and use commas to separate ideas.

× But sometimes I also enjoy fields abroad when I travel.

✓ But sometimes I also enjoy visiting fields abroad when I travel.

The sentence lacks a verb that expresses the action of enjoying something abroad; adding 'visiting' clarifies the action. Also 'fields abroad' is okay but 'visit fields abroad' is clearer. This fixes the sentence structure and makes plurality consistent with the verb. Suggestions: use gerund/verb 'visiting' to show the activity.