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Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful sun raised whenever I travel. Taking feathers help me remember special moment and place and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with a friend. Photography is the relaxing habits for me and I like to experiment with a different angels and lighting.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Personality. I prefer the views in rural areas. I love electoral scenarios like the mountains, the rivers and fields. It's a much more peaceful and relaxing and I also feel refreshed when I take photos of the sunset or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I enjoying both the logo and for foreign interviews. Each place has its own unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of the familiar scenery, while all the time I craft the excitement of the exploring somewhere completed new.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: 用简洁、准确的句子直接回答问题,注意词汇拼写与搭配(sunrise, photos, moments, habit, angles),避免冗长和重复。可以用一到两句主题句然后用一到两句具体细节支持,使用连接词使表达连贯。发音或语法错误常见于时态和单复数,回答应在最多五句内完成。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I love taking photos of sunrises when I travel because they help me remember special moments and places. I also enjoy experimenting with different angles and lighting, and I often share my best shots on social media.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答要直接并自然(开头不要说“Personality”)。使用具体词汇描述景色(mountains, rivers, fields)时注意拼写与搭配,同时用连接词(for example, because)把理由和感受连接起来。保持句子简短清晰,控制在五句内。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find the countryside more peaceful and refreshing. For example, mountains, rivers and wide fields create beautiful photo opportunities, especially at sunset. I also enjoy the fresh air and calm atmosphere when I go out to take pictures.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 表达要清楚并注意词语选择与语法(enjoying→enjoy, local/not "logo", foreign places/other countries, complete→completely)。先给出直接答案(one sentence),然后用一两句具体理由或例子支持,用连接词(however, while)提高连贯性。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I enjoy both local and foreign views because each place has its own charm. While I appreciate the comfort and familiarity of scenes at home, I also love the excitement of discovering completely new landscapes when I travel abroad.

Ngữ pháp

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× Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful sun raised whenever I travel.

Absolutely, I love capturing beautiful sunrises whenever I travel.

原句中“sun raised”不是正确的名词短语。应使用复合名词“sunrise/sunrises”(日出)。另外语境为经常性动作,应使用复数“sunrises”。建议记住常见自然现象的固定表达(sunrise, sunset)。

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× Taking feathers help me remember special moment and place and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with a friend.

Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

原句有多处错误:1) “Taking feathers” 应为“Taking photos”(动名词短语后接名词,且语义错误)。2) 主语是动名词短语,谓语需第三人称单数“helps”(属第三人称单数问题,分类为动词形式)。3) “special moment and place” 应为复数“special moments and places”。4) “with a friend” 更自然用复数“with friends”表示泛指。建议注意动名词主语的一致以及名词单复数搭配。

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× Photography is the relaxing habits for me and I like to experiment with a different angels and lighting.

Photography is a relaxing hobby for me, and I like to experiment with different angles and lighting.

原句问题:1) “the relaxing habits” 用词不当且数不匹配,应为“a relaxing hobby”或“relaxing habit”单数且不加定冠词“the”。2) “a different angels” 不符合语法,不能同时有不定冠词与复数名词,且“angels”拼写错误,应为“angles”(角度)。3) 保持并列时在逗号后连接。建议学习常见名词搭配(hobby, habit)和名词单复数、冠词用法。

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× Personality.

Personally.

原句“Personality.” 用词错误,原词为名词“个性”,应使用副词“Personally”表示“就我个人而言”。建议区分词类并使用正确的副词形式表达观点。

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× I prefer the views in rural areas.

I prefer views in rural areas.

此句可接受,但“the views”在泛指时更自然省略定冠词,虽非严重错误,但更地道用法为“I prefer views in rural areas.” 建议在一般偏好表达中省略定冠词以显自然。

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× I love electoral scenarios like the mountains, the rivers and fields.

I love rural scenery like the mountains, the rivers, and the fields.

原句“electoral scenarios” 用词错误:应为“rural scenery”(乡村景色/scenery 不可数)。“scenery”是不可数名词,且“fields”前最好加定冠词或并列一致。建议记住常见搭配(rural scenery, mountain scenery)并注意不可数名词用法。

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× It's a much more peaceful and relaxing and I also feel refreshed when I take photos of the sunset or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

It's much more peaceful and relaxing, and I also feel refreshed when I take photos of the sunset or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

原句中“a much more peaceful and relaxing” 冠词使用多余,“much more” 已足够修饰。句子连接处需加逗号并使用并列连词“and”。建议简化修饰结构并注意连词与标点。

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× To be honest, I enjoying both the logo and for foreign interviews.

To be honest, I enjoy both the local and foreign locations.

原句问题:1) “I enjoying” 中动词形式错误,应为一般现在时“I enjoy”。2) “the logo” 应为“local”(拼写错误且用词错误),3) “for foreign interviews” 完全不合语境,应为“foreign locations”。总体为动词时态和词汇错误。建议注意动词原形用法以及常见词拼写。

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× Each place has its own unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of the familiar scenery, while all the time I craft the excitement of the exploring somewhere completed new.

Each place has its own unique charm, so sometimes I appreciate the comfort of familiar scenery, while at other times I crave the excitement of exploring somewhere completely new.

原句多处错误:1) “the familiar scenery” 可去掉定冠词表示泛指。2) “all the time I craft the excitement” 语序和词汇错误,应为“at other times I crave the excitement”(表达相对时间并用恰当动词)。3) “of the exploring somewhere completed new” 结构错误且拼写错:应为“of exploring somewhere completely new”。建议注意时间对比连接词(while/at other times)、正确动词选择(crave)及副词拼写(completely)。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ForeignOverseas; Unfamiliar
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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