Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid confusing or incorrect words (e.g. 'flesh') and repeat ideas less. Use one or two brief supporting details (why you enjoy it and what you do with the photos) and link them logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different scenes because each photo captures a unique mood. For example, I photograph street life to remember candid moments, and I often share these images with friends so we can relive those memories together.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear direct answer then give two concise reasons linked with connectors. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to show contrast and reason.

Ví dụ: I like both urban and rural views, depending on my mood. When I need to relax, I prefer rural areas because the quiet and nature help me recharge; however, when I want to socialize and go out, urban areas are better because they offer more activities and places to meet friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same point. Use specific examples or places to make your answer more concrete. Keep sentences grammatically correct and use linking phrases like 'for example' or 'because' to structure your supporting details.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has extensive green landscapes that make me feel relaxed. For example, there are several national parks and lakes near my hometown that I often visit to hike and unwind.

× Yes I really like taking picture of different people because it give me a different vibe and when I share them I can feel the memories of different types of flesh and view and I really love to take picture of those and keep this and then when I get old and look back to whole memory.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different people because it gives me a different vibe, and when I share them I can feel the memories of different faces and views. I really love to take pictures of those moments and keep them so that when I get old I can look back at the whole memory.

Multiple issues: 'taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (use plural noun with 'like taking' - related to plural but also typical collocation); 'give' needs third-person singular 'gives' (subject-verb agreement; see ID 2 but primary correction here involves verb form), 'flesh and view' is incorrect collocation—'faces and views' is appropriate. Use of 'take picture' repeated changed to 'take pictures' and 'keep this' to 'keep them' (pronoun correction). Also adjusted sentence boundaries and prepositions ('look back to' -> 'look back at'). Suggestion: use 'taking pictures' and check subject-verb agreement for singular subjects, choose correct nouns like 'faces' not 'flesh', and use appropriate pronouns like 'them'.

× Yes I really like taking picture of different people because it give me a different vibe and when I share them I can feel the memories of different types of flesh and view and I really love to take picture of those and keep this and then when I get old and look back to whole memory.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different people because it gives me a different vibe, and when I share them I can feel the memories of different faces and views. I really love to take pictures of those moments and keep them so that when I get old I can look back at the whole memory.

The verb 'give' must agree with the singular subject 'it' and become 'gives'. Also several related errors were fixed (plural nouns, pronouns, prepositions). Suggestion: after 'it' use 'gives' and check each verb for agreement with its subject.

× Yes I really like taking picture of different people because it give me a different vibe and when I share them I can feel the memories of different types of flesh and view and I really love to take picture of those and keep this and then when I get old and look back to whole memory.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different people because it gives me a different vibe, and when I share them I can feel the memories of different faces and views. I really love to take pictures of those moments and keep them so that when I get old I can look back at the whole memory.

'taking picture' and 'take picture' should be plural 'taking pictures'/'take pictures' because multiple photos are implied. 'flesh' should be 'faces' and 'view' should be 'views' to match plural references. 'keep this' should be 'keep them' to match plural 'pictures'. Suggestion: match singular/plural forms consistently and use appropriate nouns.

× Yes I really like taking picture of different people because it give me a different vibe and when I share them I can feel the memories of different types of flesh and view and I really love to take picture of those and keep this and then when I get old and look back to whole memory.

✓ Yes, I really like taking pictures of different people because it gives me a different vibe, and when I share them I can feel the memories of different faces and views. I really love to take pictures of those moments and keep them so that when I get old I can look back at the whole memory.

Pronoun 'this' is incorrect when referring to multiple pictures; use 'them'. Also 'when I get old and look back to whole memory' needs 'look back at the whole memory'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents and use correct prepositions with 'look back'.

× When I fail to recharge myself I just prefer to live in rural area and when I get to socialize with my friends and other people then I just want to love live in urban area to have some fun with my friends and others peoples.

✓ When I fail to recharge myself, I prefer to live in a rural area, and when I want to socialize with my friends and other people, I prefer to live in an urban area to have some fun with my friends and other people.

Prepositions and articles: use 'in a rural area' and 'in an urban area'. Also 'get to socialize' -> 'want to socialize' for clarity. 'others peoples' is incorrect; use 'other people'. Suggestion: use 'in a/an + area' and 'other people' for general plural.

× I prefer both but it really depend on my mood.

✓ I prefer both, but it really depends on my mood.

'depend' must be third-person singular 'depends' to match 'it'. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subjects; adverb placement is fine.

× I prefer both but it really depend on my mood.

✓ I prefer both, but it really depends on my mood.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'depends' in third-person singular. Suggestion: use 'depends' after 'it'.

× when I get to socialize with my friends and other people then I just want to love live in urban area to have some fun with my friends and others peoples.

✓ When I want to socialize with my friends and other people, I prefer to live in an urban area to have some fun with my friends and other people.

'others peoples' is incorrect; use 'other people'. Also 'urban area' needs an article 'an urban area'. Suggestion: use correct plural noun forms and include articles.

× Well, I prefer view in my own country because my country had so much green nature surrounding and I feel so good when I am surrounded by nature and there is a lot of place to visit in my own country.

✓ Well, I prefer views in my own country because my country has so much greenery surrounding it, and I feel so good when I am surrounded by nature. There are a lot of places to visit in my own country.

Mix of tenses and noun forms: 'had' should be present 'has' because preference is current. 'view' should be plural 'views'. 'green nature' -> 'greenery', 'a lot of place' -> 'a lot of places'. 'surrounding' needs object 'it'. Suggestion: keep present tense for general truths and use correct plural nouns.

× That is, my country is rich in natural places. So yeah, I just love to.

✓ That is, my country is rich in natural places. So yeah, I just love it.

'I just love to' is incomplete; use 'I just love it' to refer to the country or visiting. Suggestion: complete the verb phrase or use an object pronoun like 'it'.