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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. When I'm out for walking or play, I usually take pictures of different views, like the sceneries, the uh, the beautiful mountains and rivers, and maybe even some, uh, specific spots made by humans.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Well, it depends on the times. Sometimes I really need to be in the urban areas like the the downtown of the city to recharge myself with high energy. You know, I like the kind of vibe of going.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Well, I think I like them both. I think I'm the type of person who is willing to experience different views and different sceneries around the world. But since I haven't visited all the scenic spots in my own country yet, I'm planning to visit more in my country first, like the Guilin Mountains and.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体自然,但存在填充词(uh)、重复和语法小问题(‘for walking or play’不够地道)。建议减少停顿词,使用更精确的短语并控制长度(不超过5句)。可以先用主题句直接回答,再用一到两个具体例子支持。举例时用连接词如“for example”或“such as”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. When I walk in nature, I often photograph landscapes such as mountains and rivers because I like their peaceful atmosphere. I also take pictures of man-made spots, for example historic buildings or colorful street scenes.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答有思路但表达有重复(‘the the’、口语填充词)且句子不够连贯。建议使用更清晰的对比句式(e.g. ‘I prefer X when... but Y when...’),用连词(however/while/when)连接观点,并给出具体理由或例子。避免模糊短语如 ‘the kind of vibe of going’,改用具体描写。

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood: when I need energy I prefer urban views because downtown areas are lively and full of cafes and street life. However, when I want to relax I prefer rural scenery, such as quiet fields and forests, because they help me unwind.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容合理但有重复(两次‘I think’)、句尾未完成(句子突然中断)。建议直接给出立场,然后用一到两句具体原因或计划支持。注意句子完整性并避免重复。可加入连接词如 ‘because’ 或 ‘so’ 来增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: I like views both at home and abroad, but I plan to explore more in my own country first because there are many famous places I haven't seen yet. For example, I want to visit the Guilin mountains and other scenic spots to appreciate local landscapes before travelling overseas.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× When I'm out for walking or play, I usually take pictures of different views, like the sceneries, the uh, the beautiful mountains and rivers, and maybe even some, uh, specific spots made by humans.

When I'm out for a walk or playing, I usually take pictures of different views, like the scenery, the beautiful mountains and rivers, and maybe even some specific spots made by humans.

错误原因:原句中使用了不正确的短语“out for walking or play”。在英语中习惯说“out for a walk”或使用动名词形式“playing”。另外,“sceneries”不常用,正确的集合名词是“scenery”。建议:把短语改为“out for a walk or playing”,并将“sceneries”改为“scenery”。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Well, it depends on the times. Sometimes I really need to be in the urban areas like the the downtown of the city to recharge myself with high energy. You know, I like the kind of vibe of going.

Well, it depends on the time. Sometimes I really need to be in urban areas, like downtown, to recharge myself and get energized. You know, I like that kind of lively vibe.

错误原因:1) “depends on the times”用法不自然,应为“depends on the time”或“depends on the situation”;2) “the the downtown of the city”有重复且冗长,通常说“downtown”或“the downtown area”;3) “to recharge myself with high energy”表达不地道,可改为“to recharge myself and get energized”;4) “the kind of vibe of going”结构混乱,意图是表达“活力/热闹的氛围”。建议:简化并重组句子,使表达自然清晰。

6: Present tense issue

× Well, I think I like them both. I think I'm the type of person who is willing to experience different views and different sceneries around the world. But since I haven't visited all the scenic spots in my own country yet, I'm planning to visit more in my country first, like the Guilin Mountains and.

Well, I think I like them both. I think I'm the type of person who is willing to experience different views and different scenery around the world. But since I haven't visited all the scenic spots in my own country yet, I'm planning to visit more in my country first, like the Guilin Mountains.

错误原因:1) “sceneries”同样应使用不可数名词“scenery”;2) 句末有不完整的停顿“and.”,需要删除多余的“and”并完整列举或以句号结束。建议:将“sceneries”改为“scenery”,并删除句末多余的“and”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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