Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, whenever and wherever I went for trip or something, I always take pictures of what I see or who I talk to and I think the pictures are the witnesses of the experience that I have been through.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends. After all, the urban and rural areas are in a different style, So maybe in the rural area I would love to take photos of the natural sceneries and in urban areas I would love to record this majestic.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
Frankly speaking, I hadn't have much chance to go for a trip abroad, so most of my pictures are taken in my own country. So but if I had the chance to take pictures of other countries, I would love to.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答总体表达清楚,但存在语法错误、冗长以及用词不够地道的问题。应注意时态与语法一致(如“went”应与现在习惯搭配),避免口语填充词(如“or something”),将句子分成主题句与支持句,并使用连词使逻辑更顺畅。可以用更地道的短语如“capture moments”或“document my experiences”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I always take photos when I travel to capture the places I visit and the people I meet, because photos help me remember those experiences.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有思路但语言表达不准确且有重复与词汇误用(如“natural sceneries”和“this majestic”不自然)。应直接给出偏好并用一两句具体理由支持,使用连接词(e.g. "however", "while"),并用更合适的词汇如 "landscapes", "city architecture", "impressive skylines"。注意冠词与单复数形式。
Ví dụ: It depends. In rural areas I prefer photographing natural landscapes because of their peaceful beauty, while in cities I enjoy capturing impressive architecture and lively street scenes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容完整但语法错误明显(如“hadn't have”错误,应为 “haven't had” 或 “haven't had many chances”),有重复连接词(“So but”)。建议先给直接回答,再补充原因与意愿,使用准确时态(现在完成时表经历)并给出具体想拍摄的国外景物以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: I usually take photos in my own country because I haven't had many opportunities to travel abroad, but if I could, I would love to photograph foreign landmarks and local cultures to compare them with home.
× Yes, of course, whenever and wherever I went for trip or something, I always take pictures of what I see or who I talk to and I think the pictures are the witnesses of the experience that I have been through.
✓ Yes, of course. Whenever and wherever I go on a trip or something, I always take pictures of what I see or who I talk to, and I think the pictures are witnesses to the experiences I have been through.
问题类型:现在时态使用错误。原句中使用了过去式“went”与现在习惯性行为“always take”混用,时态不一致。建议将“went”改为一般现在时“go”,并把“for trip”改为正确搭配“on a trip”;另外“the witnesses of the experience”不自然,改为“witnesses to the experiences”更符合英语表达。改进建议:描述习惯性动作时用一般现在时;注意固定搭配(go on a trip)和名词单复数的一致。
× Well, it depends. After all, the urban and rural areas are in a different style, So maybe in the rural area I would love to take photos of the natural sceneries and in urban areas I would love to record this majestic.
✓ Well, it depends. After all, urban and rural areas have different styles, so maybe in rural areas I would love to take photos of natural scenery, and in urban areas I would love to capture their majesty.
问题类型:介词和短语搭配使用不当。原句中“are in a different style”不自然,改为“have different styles”;“in the rural area”与上下文不一致,应使用复数或不定冠词;“natural sceneries”用法不正确,改为不可数名词“natural scenery”;“record this majestic”语法错误,'majestic'是形容词,需要名词“majesty”并与前文一致。改进建议:注意名词的可数/不可数形式和形容词/名词的搭配,避免直接字面翻译。
× Frankly speaking, I hadn't have much chance to go for a trip abroad, so most of my pictures are taken in my own country. So but if I had the chance to take pictures of other countries, I would love to.
✓ Frankly speaking, I haven't had many opportunities to travel abroad, so most of my pictures are taken in my own country. But if I had the chance to take pictures in other countries, I would love to.
问题类型:过去时态及助动词使用错误。原句中“hadn't have”是错误的双助动结构。表示到目前为止没有过多机会,应使用现在完成时“haven't had”或“haven't had many opportunities”;“go for a trip abroad”更自然为“travel abroad”;句中多余的连接词“So but”应精简为“But”。改进建议:学习现在完成时的结构(have/has + past participle),避免重复使用否定助动词;使用更地道的搭配(travel abroad, many opportunities)。