Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, absolutely. When I travel to different places or when I see some beautiful scenery, I always take out my phone and take the the Take take this moment picture.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I like rural areas because I live in urban areas right now and every day I travel, every day I drive my car and travel in the city, city area, so.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in other countries because I'm familiar to my country and I want to try travel to different countries to see different culture. It's more interesting to see here.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且积极,但存在重复、语法与用词不准确的问题(如“take the the Take take this moment picture”)。建议:1) 避免重复词语,注意句子连贯;2) 把主题句和支持句分开,用一到两句具体补充细节(如拍摄的对象、用途或感受);3) 使用恰当短语如“capture the moment”或“take photos of scenery”。练习时可先构思1个主题句和1-2个具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. When I travel or see beautiful scenery, I usually take out my phone to capture the moment, especially landscapes or interesting architecture, so I can remember the trip and share it with friends.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好但结构松散、重复较多且缺乏具体支持细节。建议:1) 开门见山给出主题句(I prefer rural areas.);2) 用一到两句给出具体原因并用连接词(because, so, therefore);3) 避免不必要重复,控制在三到四句内。可以提到具体例子(空气更好、景色更宁静)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because I live in a busy city and often find urban scenery noisy and crowded. Rural landscapes offer fresh air and peaceful scenes, like rolling hills and farmland, which help me relax.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但语法和用词不准确(如“I'm familiar to my country”应为“familiar with”),且补充细节较少。建议:1) 使用正确的介词和短语(familiar with, experience different cultures);2) 提供一两个具体例子说明为什么更有趣(如 architecture, food, traditions);3) 用连词自然衔接观点与理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I’m already familiar with my home country and want to experience different cultures. For example, I enjoy seeing foreign architecture and trying local dishes, which makes travelling more exciting.
× When I travel to different places or when I see some beautiful scenery, I always take out my phone and take the the Take take this moment picture.
✓ When I travel to different places or when I see some beautiful scenery, I always take out my phone and take a picture to capture the moment.
句中原本使用了重复词(“take the the Take take”),并且短语结构不自然。应使用动词短语“take a picture”表示“拍照”,并用不定式或短语“to capture the moment”表明目的。建议删去重复部分,使用正确的名词短语和不定式表达目的,使句子流畅准确。
× In my opinion, I like rural areas because I live in urban areas right now and every day I travel, every day I drive my car and travel in the city, city area, so.
✓ In my opinion, I prefer rural areas because I live in an urban area right now and every day I drive around the city.
原句存在冗余和结构混乱(重复短语“every day I travel, every day I drive my car and travel in the city, city area”),且冠词使用不当(应为“an urban area”)。建议去掉重复部分,合并相近表达,使用简单句“drive around the city”更自然。
× I prefer views in other countries because I'm familiar to my country and I want to try travel to different countries to see different culture.
✓ I prefer views in other countries because I'm familiar with my country and I want to try traveling to different countries to see different cultures.
短语“be familiar to”错误,应使用“be familiar with”。另外,“try travel”动词搭配错误,应使用动名词“try traveling”或不定式“try to travel”,此处更自然用动名词。名词“culture”需用复数“cultures”表示不同国家的多种文化。建议掌握常用介词搭配(familiar with)和动词搭配(try doing / try to do),并注意可数名词的单复数。
× It's more interesting to see here.
✓ It's more interesting to see there.
句子中地点副词使用不当:说其它国家时应使用“there”而不是“here”。“here”指说话者当前所在地点,与想表达的“别的国家”不符。建议根据语境区分here和there。