Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 简洁直接地回答问题，注意时态和语法错误，避免冗长或重复的表达；在支持细节时使用连词使句子更连贯。建议先用一句主题句明确回答，然后用一两句具体细节支撑，句子总数不超过5句。注意动词不定式和过去时的正确使用（例如“like taking”，“I often hung out”，“we usually went”）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I was a child, my best friend and I often went to gardens and scenic spots to play football and take photos. Those outings helped me notice small details in the landscape, like patterns of light and shadow, which I still look for now.

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并注意语法与词序，减少填充词（uh）与重复。先直接给出偏好（topic sentence），然后用一两句具体原因支持，使用连接词如“because”或“so”。注意比较级和形容词用法（例如“more beautiful than urban areas”，“closer to nature”，“I prefer being alone and peaceful”）。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they are more peaceful and their scenery is more beautiful than in cities. I like being closer to nature and enjoying quiet moments, which helps me relax and concentrate when taking photos.

Gợi ý: 直接回答并给出具体例子，减少犹豫词。注意句子结构，使用正确的表达描述景点（例如“there are many kinds of landscapes to visit, such as Dunhuang, Huangshan and Taishan”）。提供理由时可以简短说明情感或便利性。

Ví dụ: I prefer viewing landscapes in my own country because China has a great variety of scenery to explore. For example, I would love to visit Dunhuang for its desert and murals, Huangshan for its dramatic peaks and clouds, and Taishan for its historic paths and temples.

× Of course, I'd like to taking pictures of different views.

✓ Of course, I'd like to take pictures of different views.

此处使用固定结构“would like to + 动词原形”，后面动词不能用 -ing 形式。建议记住短语“would like to”后接动词原形，例如“I'd like to go, I'd like to eat”。

× In my childhood I often hang out with my best friend and we are usually go to the garden or some beautiful landscapes, places to play the football or taking some pictures.

✓ In my childhood I often hung out with my best friend and we usually went to the garden or some beautiful places to play football or take some pictures.

句子描述过去的习惯，应使用过去时：hang → hung，are usually go → usually went。并且“places to play the football or taking some pictures”中名词搭配和动词形式不一致，应改为“places to play football or take some pictures”。建议：描述过去习惯使用过去时（used to / simple past），并保持并列动词形式一致。

× I prefer the rural areas because I think the rural areas, uh, landscape was uh, very beautiful then urban areas and more nature.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I think the rural landscape is much more beautiful than urban areas and has more nature.

此句为一般现在时表达喜好和观点，谓语应使用现在时（was → is）。比较级结构错误：应使用“more beautiful than”。另外“more nature”表达不准确，改为“has more nature”或“is closer to nature”。建议：表达比较时用“more/less ... than”，保持时态一致。

× And I want to more closer nature and want to be quiet alone that I think rural areas is my best.

✓ And I want to be closer to nature and to be quiet and alone, so I think rural areas are best for me.

原句中“more closer”重复比较标记，应去掉“more”；“closer nature”需要介词“to”连接；“want to be quiet alone”应补连词并调整词序；“rural areas is”主谓不一致，areas 为复数应用 are。建议：避免重复比较词（more + -er），正确使用介词短语“closer to”，并注意主谓数一致。

× And I prefer, umm, I prefer my own country because my country is China and there are many kinds of landscape and to wait for me to, uh, visit it, such as the Dunhuang and Huangshan or Taishan.

✓ I prefer my own country because my country is China and there are many kinds of landscapes waiting for me to visit, such as Dunhuang, Huangshan and Taishan.

“to wait for me to visit it”语序不自然，应改为“landscapes waiting for me to visit”或“that I want to visit”。此外“the Dunhuang”中的冠词不必要，地名通常不加定冠词，且并列地名用 and 连接。建议：把不自然的被动/不定式结构改为现在分词短语或定语从句，并注意地名不加冠词。