Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Keep it under five sentences and avoid irrelevant pronoun errors. For example, correct past tense and possessives, and add a reason phrase with 'because' or 'as'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments with family and friends. For example, last weekend I took several photos at a nearby park during a memorable picnic, which captured the children playing and the sunset. These photos help me recall the atmosphere and emotions from that day.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and coherently: state your preference clearly, give a specific reason, and use linking words to connect ideas. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid confusing phrases like 'theory Google view'. Mention one concrete example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I find natural scenery more relaxing and beautiful. For instance, my grandchildren and I often enjoy mountain and coast views that are breathtaking and remind me of places in China. These real landscapes feel more peaceful than urban scenes.

Gợi ý: Be concise and relevant: give a clear preference (own country or abroad), explain why with specific reasons (culture, scenery, climate) and avoid unclear pronouns and irrelevant statements. Use two to three coherent sentences with linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy experiencing different landscapes and cultures. For example, I like visiting places with mountains and dry, warm climates because they offer scenery that is very different from my home. These trips give me new experiences and memories.

× Yes I do, I want to take me to picture of difference view because they help me remember special moment with family and friends.

✓ Yes, I do. I want to take pictures of different views because they help me remember special moments with family and friends.

Original uses incorrect pronoun 'me' and singular/plural errors: 'take me to picture' should be 'take pictures' (verb + plural noun). 'difference view' should be 'different views'. 'special moment' should be plural 'special moments' to match general meaning. Also add necessary punctuation. Suggestion: use correct object form and match singular/plural.

× Twice of her last weekend I took a photo at a nearby park to cater a memorable picnic.

✓ Last weekend I took photos twice at a nearby park to capture a memorable picnic.

Phrase 'Twice of her last weekend' is ungrammatical. Use 'Last weekend' and place frequency 'twice' after the verb or before the verb phrase. 'to cater a memorable picnic' uses wrong verb 'cater'; correct verb is 'capture' to mean record a memory. Ensure past tense 'took' is used consistently.

× Assuming I prefer will be within urban area because many sleeping here.

✓ I prefer urban areas because many people live here.

Original mixes tenses and uses incorrect structures: 'Assuming I prefer will be within' is incorrect. Use present simple 'I prefer' to state preference. 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' or 'the urban area' depending on context. 'many sleeping here' lacks a subject and correct verb; use 'many people live here.' Keep present tense for habitual preference.

× My grandchild have mountain and beautiful West Coast scenes are breathtaking and often remind me of China.

✓ My grandchildren have mountains, and the beautiful West Coast scenes are breathtaking and often remind me of China.

Subject-verb agreement and plural/singular: 'grandchild have' should be 'grandchildren have' or 'my grandchild has' depending on number; context suggests plural. 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains'. Also sentence run-on: split into two clauses with 'and'. Ensure verbs agree with plural subjects.

× So I enjoy more than theory Google view.

✓ So I enjoy it more than viewing photos on Google.

Original 'theory Google view' is incorrect phrase. Likely comparison between experiencing views and seeing them on Google. Use 'viewing photos on Google' or 'Google's views'. Also include pronoun 'it' to refer to experiencing real views and place 'more' after verb 'enjoy'.

× I I prefer viewing other friends here because I can see you more while I see you than I have at my home.

✓ I prefer visiting friends in other places because I can see them more often than I can at home.

Original repeats 'I' and uses 'viewing other friends' incorrectly; 'visiting friends' is idiomatic. 'see you' incorrect pronoun; should be 'see them' to refer to friends. Use comparative structure 'more often than I can at home.' Maintain present simple for preference.

× I really instead do earlier.

✓ Actually, I prefer doing that earlier.

Original is ungrammatical. Possibly intends 'I really prefer to do it earlier' or 'I did it earlier.' Choose 'I prefer doing that earlier' for clarity. Use adverb 'actually' or 'instead' appropriately and proper verb form.

× The weather landscape is mostly mountains and the climate is hot and dry.

✓ The landscape is mostly mountainous, and the climate is hot and dry.

'Weather landscape' is incorrect collocation; use 'landscape' or 'scenery'. 'mountains' used as adjective should be 'mountainous'. Keep parallel structure and correct noun/adjective forms.

× So So our visiting place which beats products for this disease and for different experience.

✓ So our visits there provide a different experience and are great for relaxation.

Original is incoherent: 'beats products for this disease' makes no sense. Likely meant 'is good for health' or 'great for relaxation' and 'for a different experience.' Rephrase to clear, meaningful sentence. Remove duplicate 'So'. Use noun 'visits' and clear verbs.