Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and repetitions, give a concise topic sentence and one brief supporting detail. Use varied vocabulary and avoid filler words. For example, replace repeated words with adjectives and add a short reason or example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing striking views such as sunrises and sunsets because the changing light creates vivid colors and interesting silhouettes.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (umm, uh), and use linking words to add one specific supporting detail. Replace vague phrases with precise descriptions.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer rural views because they offer open skies and diverse wildlife; for instance, I enjoy watching flocks of birds at dawn which creates a peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer first, then provide one or two specific reasons. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Be precise about what you like (landscapes, mountains, lakes) and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'for example.'

Ví dụ: If I could travel, I would prefer views in other countries, especially Switzerland, because its alpine scenery and clear mountain lakes offer dramatic landscapes and excellent air quality.

× Yes, I definitely like taking pictures of some some mesmerizing views like like sunset, sunrise, these kind of views.

✓ Yes, I definitely like taking pictures of some mesmerizing views like sunsets and sunrises, these kinds of views.

Repetition ('some some', 'like like') is redundant and should be removed. 'Sunset, sunrise' should be plural ('sunsets and sunrises') when speaking generally. 'These kind of views' is incorrect: use plural agreement 'these kinds of views' or 'this kind of view'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words and ensure number agreement for general statements.

× Well, I usually prefer views in the rural areas because, umm, in the rural areas we can see the, uh, sky and uh, the various kind of birds and animals as well in a good view.

✓ Well, I usually prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas we can see the sky and various kinds of birds and animals as well.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before general plural nouns 'rural areas' and 'sky'. 'The various kind of birds' is incorrect: use 'various kinds of birds' or 'various kinds of birds and animals'. Also 'in a good view' is awkward and unnecessary. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles and correct plural phrasing.

× So that's why I choose rural area instead of urban area.

✓ So that's why I choose rural areas instead of urban areas.

Singular/plural inconsistency: 'rural area' and 'urban area' should match the general reference 'areas'. Use plural to indicate preference for the type of area in general. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general preferences.

× Well, I if I get a chance to travel to another country, then I definitely prefer the another country views because and my preferred country is Switzerland and I also have references about the Switzerland that it has a very mesmerizing views.

✓ Well, if I get a chance to travel to another country, I would definitely prefer the views in another country. My preferred country is Switzerland, and I have heard that it has very mesmerizing views.

Remove the extra 'I' after 'Well,' and correct conditional/modal usage: use 'would' to express preference in a hypothetical situation. 'the another country views' is incorrect article placement; use 'the views in another country' or 'views in another country'. 'References about the Switzerland' is wrong: use 'heard that Switzerland' or 'have references about Switzerland' without 'the'. 'a very mesmerizing views' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'views' and should be 'very mesmerizing views'. Suggestion: streamline sentence, fix article use, and use conditional/modal form for hypothetical preference.

× The the air quality is so great there and.

✓ The air quality there is excellent.

Repeated 'The the' is redundant. The original ends with 'and.' making it a sentence fragment. 'So great' is informal; 'excellent' is clearer and concise. Suggestion: remove repetition, finish the thought, and use a complete concise sentence.