Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking photos of different views. I think it's uh, I think taking pictures of different views is very funny and uh, can sharing with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in rural areas. Umm. There are many human activities and many beautiful views.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in my country because I think the country, the because I think my country's view is a very, it has a very, it has, it was a different.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且避免重复,减少填充词(例如“uh”)并使用更恰当的词汇表达情感与用途。可以先用一句话直接回应(喜欢与否并给理由),然后用一到两句具体说明你为什么喜欢和如何分享照片,使用连词使句子更连贯。举例说明拍哪类景色或分享给谁会更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they capture moments I want to remember. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes and then share them with my friends on social media so we can talk about our travels.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更具体且逻辑清晰,避免含糊的表述(例如“many human activities”与乡村矛盾)。先给出明确立场,然后用一到两句具体原因和例子支持,使用连词如“because”或“for example”使语意连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in rural areas because they are quieter and more scenic. For example, I like photographing rolling fields, rustic farms and local markets where people work, which feel more peaceful than crowded city streets.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答非常不连贯且重复,应先明确立场,然后给出具体原因并举例。避免重复短语,使用丰富但贴切的词汇(如“unique, diverse, familiar”)。控制在最多五句话内,使用连接词如“because”或“especially”来组织信息。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and unique to me. For instance, our coastal landscapes and traditional villages reflect local culture and seasons, so I find them more meaningful to photograph than foreign sights.
× I think it's uh, I think taking pictures of different views is very funny and uh, can sharing with my friends.
✓ I think taking pictures of different views is fun and I can share them with my friends.
错误在于动词形式和结构:原句中同时使用了两次“I think”,且将“funny”误用来表达“有趣/好玩”(应为“fun”),并且错误地写成“can sharing”,把情态动词后应接动词原形的规则违反了。建议:1) 使用“fun”来表示“有趣”,而非“funny”(funny多指滑稽可笑)。2) 情态动词(can)后接动词原形,所以应为“can share”。3) 为了表达清晰,把句子拆成两部分或用连词连接,避免重复“I think”。 示例改正:"I think taking pictures of different views is fun and I can share them with my friends."
× Umm. There are many human activities and many beautiful views.
✓ There are many human activities and many beautiful views in rural areas.
句子本身时态无误,但缺少地点短语使回答不够完整,容易造成语义不清。根据提问(偏好乡村景色),应在句末明确地点“in rural areas”。建议:在回答时把句子补充完整,明确与问题的关联。
× I prefer views in my country because I think the country, the because I think my country's view is a very, it has a very, it has, it was a different.
✓ I prefer views in my country because I think my country's landscapes are very different.
原句结构混乱,有重复片段和不完整的短语(如“the country, the because I think”),并且时态和词形不一致(“it has, it was a different”没有明确名词)。建议:1) 去掉重复短语,保持句子连贯。2) 使用复数“landscapes”或“views”来表述景色的多样性。3) 用形容词“different”直接修饰名词,而不是单独使用。示例改正:"I prefer views in my country because I think my country's landscapes are very different."