Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response grammatically correct, concise, and more coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses, articles, and word choice (e.g., 'I love taking pictures of different views', 'from the car', 'spectacular landscapes'). Avoid redundancy and long fragments.

Ví dụ: I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. For example, I often take photos from a car or public transport when I see spectacular landscapes, such as mountains or rivers, because the changing light makes the scenes more dramatic.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific supporting reasons using linking words. Correct pluralization and articles, and remove filler words. Mention concrete examples (e.g., 'rooftop views at night') and explain why you prefer them.

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer urban views because cities have modern high-rise buildings and interesting rooftop perspectives. For instance, I enjoy taking photos of city skylines at night when the lights create reflections and contrast, which makes the scene more photogenic.

Gợi ý: Clarify your main idea and fix vocabulary and grammar errors. State the preference directly, then add specific examples and reasons with linking words. Replace unclear words ('abuse my contest') with 'my own country' and correct nouns and plurals. Be specific about places you like and why.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it is very diverse and I haven't seen many regions yet. For example, my country has beautiful mountains, rivers, and coastal areas, so I enjoy photographing these natural landscapes when I travel domestically.

× Obviously, I loved taking picture different views, especially when I traveling somewhere and this time I like to take fixer from car or public transport, especially when I see any spectacular landscape and any mountain or any river there's give me make me.

✓ Obviously, I love taking pictures of different views, especially when I am traveling somewhere, and this time I like to take pictures from a car or public transport, especially when I see a spectacular landscape, a mountain, or a river; they inspire me.

Multiple present-tense and verbal form errors: 'loved' should be 'love' to match present habit; 'taking picture different views' needs plural 'pictures' and preposition 'of'; 'I traveling' requires auxiliary 'am' with present participle; 'fixer' is incorrect word, replaced with 'pictures'; 'from car or public transport' needs articles 'a'; 'any spectacular' -> 'a spectacular'; 'there's give me make me' is ungrammatical and intended meaning is 'they inspire me'. Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habits, use correct auxiliaries for present continuous, ensure noun plurals and prepositions, and replace unclear words with correct nouns.

× I definitely prefer city because, uh, there are a lot of modern high rise building and especially I love a rooftop view and uh, in at night, uh, there are a lot of lighting system. So I really, I love to take a picture this, uh, scenario.

✓ I definitely prefer the city because there are a lot of modern high-rise buildings, and I especially love a rooftop view. At night, there are a lot of lighting systems, so I really love to take pictures of this kind of scene.

Article and count noun errors: 'prefer city' needs definite article 'the city' when speaking generally about urban areas; 'high rise building' should be plural 'high-rise buildings'; 'in at night' should be 'at night' (preposition error); 'a lot of lighting system' needs plural 'systems' and no article 'a lot of'; 'take a picture this scenario' needs preposition 'of' and plural 'pictures' or 'a picture of this kind of scene'. Suggestion: use 'the' for specific general places, match pluralization with 'a lot of', and use correct prepositions.

× Obviously, I prefer abuse my contest. There are a lot of place I do not visit yet because my country is a diverse country. There are a lot of natural place also, such as a mountain, river and dishes. So I definitely love my countries.

✓ Obviously, I prefer about my country. There are a lot of places I have not visited yet because my country is diverse. There are many natural places as well, such as mountains, rivers, and beaches. So I definitely love my country.

Multiple issues including incorrect words and prepositions: 'prefer abuse my contest' is unintelligible; likely intended 'prefer about my country' or 'prefer my country' — corrected to 'prefer my country'/'I prefer my country'. 'a lot of place' needs plural 'places'; 'I do not visit yet' should be present perfect 'I have not visited yet' to indicate unfinished experience; 'natural place' plural 'natural places'; 'dishes' is wrong word for landscapes — replaced with 'beaches'; 'my countries' should be singular 'my country' when referring to one nation. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary, use present perfect for experiences up to now, ensure plural forms where needed, and use correct prepositions or omit them when unnecessary.