Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I like taking beautiful views during my trip which can uh, restore incredible view as a good memory in my phone.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in urban areas which can give me a few of uh, rallies of mind and relaxable mood and enjoy the breath of, uh, nature.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer view in my country because my country is big enough and have different kind of views that I have that I haven't watched all of them. So I will try my best to travel and watch different types of views in my country and uh, see of them as possible.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 64.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、简洁并直接回应问题;避免填充词(如 uh),并用一到两句具体细节支持观点。例如说明喜欢拍什么类型的景色、用来做什么(分享、回忆等)。注意句子流畅和词汇准确(restore 用法不当)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially landscapes and cityscapes when I travel. I usually take photos to keep memories and to share my trips with friends on social media.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 53.0Gợi ý: 答案需更明确且语义准确;避免矛盾(城市景观与“enjoy the breath of nature”冲突)。用一到两句说明原因并举例支持,使用合适的词汇(例如 "refresh my mind", "relaxing atmosphere")。去掉冗余填充词。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I find city skylines and lively streets energizing. For example, I enjoy watching the skyline at sunset and the mixture of architecture and parks that make me feel refreshed.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅、语法正确并删去多余重复;用一到两句具体理由和例子支持观点(例如不同地区的风景类型、文化特色)。把将来计划表达清楚(例如 "I plan to travel more domestically")。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes, from mountains to beaches. I plan to travel more within the country to visit places I haven't seen yet, such as the northern highlands and coastal towns.
× I like taking beautiful views during my trip which can uh, restore incredible view as a good memory in my phone.
✓ I like taking photos of beautiful views during my trips, which can preserve incredible scenes as good memories on my phone.
原句中應使用動名詞短語 "taking photos of..." 而不是單獨說 "taking beautiful views"(8:動詞 + -ing 形式)。此外,restore 用法不當,應改為 preserve(保存)。複數形式 trips 和名詞搭配,以及介詞 on my phone 更自然。建議:用固定表達 "take photos of" 或 "take pictures of",並注意動詞意義和常用介詞。
× I prefer views in urban areas which can give me a few of uh, rallies of mind and relaxable mood and enjoy the breath of, uh, nature.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas, which can give me a bit of a mental boost and a relaxed mood, and let me enjoy the breath of nature.
原句存在主謂一致與搭配不當(27:主語-動詞一致/句子搭配)。"a few of rallies of mind" 結構不正確且不可數名詞搭配錯誤,應改為 "a bit of a mental boost" 或 "some relaxation"。relaxable 不是常用形容詞,應用 "relaxed" 或 "relaxing"。並且需在連接詞處加標點分隔從句。建議:使用常見搭配如 "give me a relaxed mood" 或 "help me relax",注意可數/不可數名詞的區別。
× I prefer view in my country because my country is big enough and have different kind of views that I have that I haven't watched all of them.
✓ I prefer views in my country because my country is big enough and has different kinds of scenery that I haven't seen all of yet.
句子有現在時使用和主謂一致問題(6:現在時問題)。主語 "my country" 為單數,應用動詞 has 而非 have;view 應為複數 views 或更自然的 "scenery/kinds of scenery";"watched" 用於觀看影像,描述看風景應用 "seen"。建議:注意主語單複數與動詞一致,使用正確動詞(see vs watch),以及可數/不可數名詞形式。
× So I will try my best to travel and watch different types of views in my country and uh, see of them as possible.
✓ So I will try my best to travel and see as many of them as possible.
原句在量詞使用和動詞搭配上有錯誤(14:量詞使用不當)。"watch different types of views" 不自然,應用 "see" 或 "visit";短語 "see of them as possible" 結構錯誤,正確表達應為 "see as many of them as possible"。建議:使用 "as many ... as possible" 結構來表示最大數量,並用 "see/visit" 來描述看風景或景點。