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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

A yes is special when it comes to the view that unusual to be seen in my living areas. And I usually take some pictures and share them with my families or my friends.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

I prefer rural areas because I've spent a majority of my life living in the urban areas so. I'm a little bit bored of the urban census, so I think the rural areas we use would be much more refreshing and beautiful.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I enjoy both of the views as each country has its own unique scenery, so I'd like to spend several times to explore the different views. If I had the opportunity.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然和直接,句子结构要正确并避免多余冗长。建议先用一句主题句直接回答(Yes/No + 理由),然后用1–2句具体细节支持。注意冠词、复数形式和固定搭配(例如:"an unusual view", "my family and friends")。尝试使用衔接词如"because"或"so"来增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of unusual views that I don't see often in my area. I usually take several photos and then share the best ones with my family and friends because they like seeing different scenes from my town.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、语法准确并用合适词汇表达理由。避免拼写或词汇错误(如"census"应为"scenery"或"city life")。先给出明确立场,然后用1–2句具体原因支持,用连接词如"because"或"so"。

Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because I have lived in cities most of my life and find urban life a bit tiring. Rural scenery feels more peaceful and refreshing, with open fields and cleaner air.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答比较清晰,但要更自然、完整并注意时态和表达。先直接回答(both / either),然后给出具体原因或一个例子。把零碎句合并为流畅的句子,避免不完整的条件句末尾单独停顿。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I enjoy both because every country offers unique scenery and cultural features. If I had the chance, I would travel more frequently to explore different landscapes, from coastal cliffs to mountain villages.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× A yes is special when it comes to the view that unusual to be seen in my living areas.

Yes — I especially like views that are unusual for the area where I live.

原句结构混乱,使用了“A yes is special”这样的短语不符合英语表达习惯,且“the view that unusual to be seen in my living areas”缺少动词形式和正确的从句结构。建议将句子按主语+谓语+宾语/定语从句重组,使用“especially like views that are unusual for the area where I live”的形式更自然。

Incorrect use of plural/article/pronoun (combined: Article errors & Incorrect use of pronouns)

× And I usually take some pictures and share them with my families or my friends.

I usually take some pictures and share them with my family or my friends.

原句中“families”用复数不当。當談論某人的家庭時通常用單數“family”。此外,“And”开头在口语可用但写作中可省略。建议使用“my family or my friends”。

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer rural areas because I've spent a majority of my life living in the urban areas so.

I prefer rural areas because I've spent the majority of my life living in urban areas.

原句有多余的连接词“so”和不必要的定冠词“the”以及结构重复。将“the majority of my life”与“living in urban areas”连用更自然,句末不应再接“so”。

Incorrect use of nouns/word choice (Comparative clarity)

× I'm a little bit bored of the urban census, so I think the rural areas we use would be much more refreshing and beautiful.

I'm a little bored with the urban scene, so I think rural areas are much more refreshing and beautiful.

原句中“urban census”用词错误,应为“urban scene”(城市景象/氛围)或“city life”。“bored of”在英式英语可接受,但更常见的是“bored with”。此外“the rural areas we use”语法错误且含义不清,改为“rural areas are”更通顺。

Sentence structure errors

× To be honest, I enjoy both of the views as each country has its own unique scenery, so I'd like to spend several times to explore the different views. If I had the opportunity.

To be honest, I enjoy both kinds of views because each country has its own unique scenery, so I'd like to spend some time exploring different places if I had the opportunity.

原句存在多处结构问题:"both of the views"不自然,應為"both kinds of views"或"both types of views";"spend several times to explore"错误,应为"spend some time exploring"或"spend time to explore";句尾“If I had the opportunity.”是一个不完整的从句,应与前句合并为条件句。建议将句子合并并用动名词短语“spend some time exploring”使表达自然。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
LittleShort; Young; Brief; Minor
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
UnusualUncommon
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