Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ в целом понятен, но содержит разговорные вставки («like»), повторения и небольшие стилистические ошибки. Рекомендую: 1) Убрать пустые слова («like») и повторения; 2) Сформулировать чёткое вступление (topic sentence) и добавить одно-два конкретных пояснения с связующими словами; 3) Использовать более точную лексику (например, «sunset atmosphere», «sense of freedom»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially sunsets because they create a unique atmosphere. For example, the warm colours and soft light make landscapes look more dramatic, and when I take such photos I feel a strong sense of freedom and calm.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки (артикли, согласование), повторения и неясные фразы («the peoples are people that America»). Рекомендую: 1) Исправить артикли и согласование ("I prefer views"/"they have fresh air"); 2) Убрать тавтологию и дать конкретные причины с связующими словами (например, "because", "for example"); 3) Привести ясные примеры или описания, избегая неуместных или бессвязных ссылок на страны.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the air is fresher and there are many trees. For example, I enjoy walking through quiet fields and forests, where the colours and sounds of nature are calming and refreshing.

Gợi ý: Ответ понятен, но содержит повторы, разговорные слова и несколько необоснованных обобщений («we don't have any beautiful place»). Рекомендую: 1) Сократить повторы и сформулировать причину более корректно; 2) Использовать более точные выражения и примеры (например, назвать тип мест, которые вы предпочитаете); 3) Добавить связку и одно конкретное сравнение между своей страной и другими местами.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer views in other countries because they often offer more historic architecture and diverse landscapes. For instance, I enjoy visiting European cities for their old buildings and Japan for its picturesque countryside, which I don't have access to at home.

× When I take this photo, like I feel freedom and like it's very, very beautiful for me.

✓ When I take this photo, I feel free and it is very, very beautiful to me.

The student used 'freedom' (a noun) where the adjective 'free' or adverbial phrase is required. Use 'feel free' to describe a state. Also remove filler 'like' for clarity and use 'beautiful to me' rather than 'beautiful for me' for natural collocation; maintain present simple for habitual action. Suggested improvement: replace nouns with appropriate adjectives/adverbs when describing feelings; avoid filler 'like'.

× I prefer a views in rural areas because they have they has a fresh air and beautiful trees.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they have fresh air and beautiful trees.

Errors: 'a views' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' to match plural 'views'. 'They have they has' is a repetition with incorrect verb form 'has' after plural subject; use 'have'. Also 'a fresh air' is incorrect because 'air' as an uncountable noun does not take 'a'; use 'fresh air'. Suggested improvement: check noun number and article usage; use 'have' with plural subjects.

× The nature is so beautiful and the peoples are people that America.

✓ Nature is so beautiful and the people are different from those in America.

Problems: 'The nature' usually omits the definite article when speaking generally; use 'Nature'. 'peoples' is a plural noun meaning nations; the student likely intended 'people' (persons). The phrase 'are people that America' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'are different from those in America' to convey contrast. Suggested improvement: use 'people' for plural persons, avoid unnecessary 'the' with general nouns, and use clear comparative structures.

× I prefer views in another country, in other countries because in my country we don't have any beautiful place to see and we don't have any like buildings or any facilities to build it.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in my country we don't have many beautiful places to see and we don't have buildings or facilities like those there.

Issues: 'a beautiful place' vs plural mismatch with context — use 'many beautiful places'. 'don't have any like buildings or any facilities to build it' is ungrammatical: 'like' is filler, 'facilities to build it' is unclear; corrected to 'buildings or facilities like those there' to compare features. Use present simple 'don't have' consistently for general truth. Suggested improvement: use plural nouns when speaking generally, avoid filler 'like', and form clear comparisons (e.g., 'facilities like those in other countries').