Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I like that so much because not every time I can remember different picture. If I took pictures the hero type or I want to record that memory, I can see that picture and I will feel happy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer rural areas because there is much differences in Europe areas. I mean, areas are always building, but uh, when you're in a forest or any other other view, they're not of a different tree and flowers.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I like building my own country because there's lot of different views in my country. I mean there is a 916 kilometers in my country so that a lot of different.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、语法更准确,并用连接词简洁地补充细节。例如说明拍照的原因和效果,用一两句补充说明即可。注意时态和词汇选择(不要说“every time I can remember different picture”和“hero type”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I take photos to preserve memories, so when I look back at them I feel happy and nostalgic. For example, I often photograph sunsets and landscapes during trips.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 答案需要更明确并修正逻辑和词汇错误。先给出直接答案,然后用一至两句具体理由并用连接词(because, so, for example)。避免重复和含糊的表达,如“not of a different tree”。
Ví dụ: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural variety and tranquility. For example, forests and meadows have different kinds of trees and flowers, so I can enjoy diverse scenery and fresh air.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并提供准确信息或具体例子。先给出立场,再说明原因和举例。避免不清楚的数字引用(‘916 kilometers’不明确)和语法错误。可以说‘a long coastline’或‘varied landscapes’更清楚。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because it has very diverse landscapes. For instance, we have mountains, beaches and historic towns, so I can find different kinds of scenery without traveling abroad.
× I like that so much because not every time I can remember different picture.
✓ I like that so much because I can't always remember different pictures.
原句中“not every time”用法不自然,且“picture”应为复数“pictures”以匹配“different”。建议用“I can't always”表示“并不是每次都能”,并将名词改为复数。
× If I took pictures the hero type or I want to record that memory, I can see that picture and I will feel happy.
✓ If I take pictures of a special moment or want to record a memory, I can look at the pictures and feel happy.
原句时态和结构混用(“If I took... or I want...”),条件句应保持一致,使用一般现在时表达习惯性或真实条件。将“the hero type”改为更自然的“a special moment”,并将“picture”改为复数“pictures”。同时去掉多余的将来时“will”,用现在时“feel”更自然。
× I prefer rural areas because there is much differences in Europe areas.
✓ I prefer rural areas because there are many differences in European areas.
“much”用于不可数名词,区别用法错误;“differences”是可数复数,应使用“many”。此外“Europe areas”应该用形容词形式“European areas”,并且“there are”用于复数名词。
× I mean, areas are always building, but uh, when you're in a forest or any other other view, they're not of a different tree and flowers.
✓ I mean, cities always have buildings, but when you're in a forest or other natural places, you'll find different trees and flowers.
原句“areas are always building”语法错误,应使用“cities have buildings”或“areas are full of buildings”。“any other other view”重复且表达不自然,应改为“other natural places”。“they're not of a different tree and flowers”结构混乱,改为“you'll find different trees and flowers”。同时调整人称和时态以保持连贯。
× I like building my own country because there's lot of different views in my country.
✓ I like buildings in my own country because there are a lot of different views in my country.
原句“I like building my own country”意思错误,应为“I like buildings in my own country”或“I like the buildings in my country”。“there's lot of”缺少冠词,应改为“there are a lot of”或“there's a lot of”,并使用“there are”匹配复数“views”。
× I mean there is a 916 kilometers in my country so that a lot of different.
✓ I mean my country is 916 kilometers long, so there are a lot of differences.
原句结构混乱,“there is a 916 kilometers”不符合数量表达,应把单位与名词正确搭配如“is 916 kilometers long”。结尾“so that a lot of different”不完整,需补全为“so there are a lot of differences”或更具体说明不同之处。