Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I'm not not very good at photographs though. I don't spend much time taking pictures. However, I think good photos often use different views. Umm, I think details can make the pictures much more interesting and funny.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer to choose the views in urban areas, cause in urban areas you can see the high building or another a buildings you want to say. And so it makes me more interesting and a surprise, yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in my own country rather than other countries 'cause I love my country very much and in my country you can see a lot of high buildings and a beautiful sceneries.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 发音和流利度需要改进,避免重复词(如“not not”)和犹豫语(如“Umm”)。回答要更直接并使用一到两句支持细节,句子不超过五句。可以用更恰当的词汇替换“funny”(如“interesting”或“engaging”),并用连接词使表达更连贯。举例说明你喜欢的“different views”类型(如wide-angle, close-ups)会更具体。
Ví dụ: I don't take many photos, but I enjoy trying different perspectives because they make images more interesting. For example, I like close-up shots of flowers and wide-angle views of city skylines, which highlight details and scale.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 46.0Gợi ý: 语法和句子结构需要改正,避免重复和口语化填充词(如“you want to say”,“yeah”)。应先给出主题句,然后用一到两句支持原因并用连接词(because, for example)组织内容。尽量使用复数和正确的名词形式(buildings, surprises)。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities have tall buildings and diverse architecture that catch my eye. For example, modern skyscrapers and narrow old streets create interesting contrasts that surprise me.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 注意语法(不要在because前缩写成'cause,避免冠词和单复数错误:a beautiful sceneries)。回答应更自然简洁:先给出偏好,再给出具体原因和例子。避免情感词堆砌,改用具体景观或文化特点来解释理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with its landmarks and landscapes. For instance, I enjoy photographing the city's skyline and coastal scenery, which reflect my country's unique architecture and natural beauty.
× I'm not not very good at photographs though.
✓ I'm not very good at taking photographs, though.
原句有双重否定“not not”,以及短语“good at photographs”用法不自然。英语中应使用动名词短语“taking photographs”表示擅长拍照。建议去掉多余的“not”,并改为“good at taking photographs”。
× I don't spend much time taking pictures.
✓ I don't spend much time taking pictures.
该句语法正确,无需修改。动名词短语“taking pictures”用法恰当。
× However, I think good photos often use different views.
✓ However, I think good photos often use different perspectives.
原句中“use different views”搭配不自然。英语中谈摄影时可用“use different perspectives”或“are taken from different angles”。建议用更合适的名词“perspectives”或短语“are taken from different angles”。
× Umm, I think details can make the pictures much more interesting and funny.
✓ Umm, I think details can make the pictures much more interesting and engaging.
原句用“funny”描述图片不一定合适,常用“interesting”或“engaging”。“funny”表示滑稽,可能改变本意。建议根据语境用“engaging”或“appealing”。
× I prefer to choose the views in urban areas, cause in urban areas you can see the high building or another a buildings you want to say.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas, because in cities you can see tall buildings and other structures.
原句有多处问题:1) “prefer to choose the views”不自然,直接说“I prefer views”更简洁;2) “cause”应写为“because”或“'cause”(口语)但正式一点用“because”;3) “the high building or another a buildings you want to say”语序和冠词错误,复数与冠词混用,且表达混乱。建议使用“tall buildings and other structures”。
× And so it makes me more interesting and a surprise, yeah.
✓ And so it makes me more interested and surprised, yeah.
原句用“interesting”和“a surprise”描述人的感受不正确。“interesting”是用来描述事物的形容词,描述人的感受应使用“interested”;“a surprise”是名词,表达被惊讶应使用形容词“surprised”。因此改为“interested and surprised”。
× I prefer views in my own country rather than other countries 'cause I love my country very much and in my country you can see a lot of high buildings and a beautiful sceneries.
✓ I prefer views in my own country rather than in other countries because I love my country very much, and in my country you can see many tall buildings and beautiful scenery.
原句问题包括:1) 比较结构中应使用“rather than in other countries”或“to those in other countries”,需加介词;2) “'cause”应为“because”(或口语缩写但是书面更正为because);3) “a lot of high buildings”改为“many tall buildings”更自然;4) “a beautiful sceneries”中“sceneries”不可数且冠词错误,应为“beautiful scenery”。建议按上述方式修改以符合语法与习惯用法。