Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ в целом хороший, но есть повторения и мелкие ошибки в формулировках. Постарайтесь избегать фраз-наполнителей («to be honest», «like»), сократить излишнюю повторяемость идей и сделать предложение более плавным. Также можно добавить одно конкретное подробное примечание (например, упомянуть тип пейзажа или настроение) с помощью связующих слов, чтобы ответ был более связным и насыщенным.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I really enjoy photographing different views because it is my hobby and helps me preserve memories. For example, when I photograph coastal sunsets, the images instantly bring back the atmosphere and the feelings I had at that moment.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит хорошие личные детали, но есть грамматические ошибки и лишние повторы («it's», «it's remind»), небрежное использование времен и местоимений. Сократите длину предложений, исправьте грамматику и используйте связующие слова (for example, because, so) для ясности. Уточните одно конкретное воспоминание или ощущение, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because I love nature and fresh air. For example, countryside scenes remind me of visiting my grandmother; the smell of pine and the quiet evenings always relax me and make me feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Ответ фрагментарный и содержит грамматические ошибки, повторы и незаконченные фразы. Следует сформулировать более прямой топик-сентенс и добавить одно-две конкретные причины с корректной грамматикой; избегайте повторов «but» и слова «like» без контекста. Используйте связующее слово, чтобы сравнить виды внутри страны и за её пределами.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because our natural landscapes are incredibly diverse and unspoilt. However, I also enjoy scenery abroad, for example the architecture or coastal cliffs, which offer a different kind of beauty.

× I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because it's my hobby and it helps me like preserve memories.

✓ I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because it's my hobby and it helps me preserve memories.

The phrase 'helps me like preserve' contains an unnecessary filler 'like' and incorrect sequence. After 'helps me' a base verb (infinitive without to) or 'to' + verb can be used; 'helps me preserve' is correct. Remove 'like' to make the sentence natural and grammatical. Suggestion: Omit filler words such as 'like' in formal speech and use 'helps me preserve' or 'helps me to preserve'.

× When I take photos of landscapes, they remind me of the place and the moment I was there.

✓ When I take photos of landscapes, they remind me of the place and the moment I was there.

Pronoun use is correct but the tense 'I was there' is acceptable. No grammatical correction needed; maintain as is. Consider 'when I was there' is correct to refer to past experience.

× To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas because it's about nature and it's remind me about my grandmother and time when we spend together and I really like fresh air and it's helped me with relax and feel.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas because they are about nature and remind me of my grandmother and the times we spent together. I really like the fresh air and it helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Multiple pronoun and verb-form issues: 'it's about nature' should be 'they are about nature' to match plural 'views' (subject-pronoun agreement). 'it's remind me' mixes singular 'it's' with base verb; correct is 'remind me'. 'time when we spend together' should be 'the times we spent together' (plural and past tense). 'it's helped me with relax and feel' is incorrect: use present tense 'it helps me relax and feel refreshed' and correct verb forms. Suggestions: match plural subjects with plural pronouns, use past tense for past experiences, and use 'help' + base verb to express effect.

× I prefer views in my country, but in other country I think it's beautiful too.

✓ I prefer views in my country, but in other countries I think they are beautiful too.

'In other country' is ungrammatical; use plural 'in other countries' or 'in another country'. Also 'it's beautiful' refers to 'country' singular; since speaker refers to views, use 'they are beautiful' to match plural 'views'. Suggestion: ensure noun number (singular/plural) matches context and that pronouns agree in number.

× But I know that in my country really beautiful nature and we have breathtaking natural landscapes and like.

✓ But I know that my country really has beautiful nature and breathtaking landscapes.

Original sentence lacks a main verb in the first clause ('in my country really beautiful nature' is missing 'has'). 'We have breathtaking natural landscapes' is acceptable, but ending with 'and like' is a filler and ungrammatical. Correction adds the verb 'has', removes filler, and makes the sentence concise. Suggestion: include a verb for each clause and avoid filler words such as 'and like'."}]}{