Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence saying whether you like photography, then give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and relevant vocabulary. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use words like “landscapes,” “architecture,” or “portraits” instead of unclear terms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking photos because I find landscapes and city scenes visually interesting, and photography helps me notice small details. For example, I often photograph sunsets and street architecture because the colours and light change the mood of a scene.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly (urban or rural), then give 1–2 clear, specific reasons with correct linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “I live in the yard.” Use precise vocabulary such as “urban skyline,” “parks,” or “countryside,” and correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer urban areas because…”).

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the city skyline and historic buildings. Also, there are green parks and lively streets that make photography more varied and interesting.

Gợi ý: Be clear about your preference (own country or other countries) and give specific reasons. Avoid repeating words and filler sounds (uh, so). Use linking words (for example, because, although) and give a concise example or explanation. Say one reason about familiarity or novelty and one brief supporting detail. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best spots and feel comfortable exploring them. For instance, in New York I like photographing quiet neighbourhoods and riverside parks where I can relax and take time to frame shots.

× The yes I do because taking the pictures of interesting and very visual assigners for to me, so I tried to take in a photographers and landscape and one.

✓ Yes, I do because taking pictures of interesting and visually appealing scenes is enjoyable for me, so I try to take photos of landscapes and other subjects.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: unnecessary articles ('The yes'), incorrect word forms ('visual assigners'), misplaced prepositions ('for to me'), and awkward coordination ('so I tried to take in a photographers and landscape and one'). Combine ideas into clear clauses, use correct noun phrases ('taking pictures'), correct adjective/adverb form ('visually appealing'), and use appropriate verbs ('try to take photos'). Suggestions: remove redundant words, choose correct vocabulary, and break into clear clauses.

× Yes I do I prefer in my urban areas because I live in the yard so and in addition that urban areas peaceful and great views for.

✓ Yes, I prefer urban areas because I live nearby, and in addition, urban areas are peaceful and have great views.

Errors include wrong preposition ('in my urban areas', 'in the yard'), missing verb 'are' after 'urban areas', and wrong word order ('great views for'). Use 'prefer urban areas' without 'in', say 'I live nearby' or 'I live in the city', and include the verb 'are' to form the predicate. Also place adjectives and nouns in correct order ('great views'). Suggestions: use correct prepositions for location ('in', 'nearby'), include linking verb 'are', and maintain standard adjective-noun order.

× Or in other countries, yeah. I prefer, uh, wheels in my country, own country because, uh, I live in New York. So I tried to, so I tried to, uh, live in the year because it is peaceful for me to relax and to live.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because I live in New York. I try to stay here because it is peaceful for me to relax and live.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'wheels' is incorrect for 'views'; 'my country, own country' is redundant; 'live in the year' is incorrect. Also tense and repetition issues ('So I tried to, so I tried to'). Replace with clear pronouns and nouns: 'views', 'my own country'. Use present simple 'prefer' and 'try' to match ongoing preferences. Remove redundant repetitions. Suggestions: choose correct content words, avoid redundancy, use consistent present tense for preferences and habits.