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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Thí sinh

OK, yes, I'm fond of taking pictures in different views because if I lose some, uh, before sculpture, I will to, uh, record it, uh, in my phone and sometimes I will, uh, review this. I think that is a very, uh, meaningful things.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Thí sinh

Uh, sometimes I prefer use in rural areas because I stay in city and I think, uh, rural has many different scenery and I also like to try some new things.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Thí sinh

Uh, I prefer reviews in other countries because I really enjoy trolling in foreign countries. A foreign place often offer some different and interesting scenery that, uh, I don't know before. Uh, so I like discovering some new things and learn some, uh, other cultures.

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Part 1

Do you like taking pictures of different views?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 句子结構混亂,語音停頓多且使用填充詞(uh),有多處語法錯誤和詞彙不準確。建議:1) 回答時先用一個明確的主題句(例如:I enjoy taking photos of different views.),然後用1–2句具體原因支持;2) 刪除過多的填充詞,練習流暢連接句子;3) 修正語法(例如“if I lose some”不通,應換為具體表達如“in case I forget”或“to preserve memories”),並注意名詞單複數和動詞形式;4) 控制回答長度在最多5句內。

Ví dụ: I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me preserve memories and notice details I might otherwise forget. For example, when I see an interesting sculpture or a sunset, I take a picture so I can review it later and share it with friends.

Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答能表達偏好但語言不夠準確且有語法錯誤與詞彙選擇問題。建議:1) 先給出直接答案(例如:I prefer rural areas),然後用2句具體理由支持;2) 使用正確的詞彙搭配(如“live in the city”, “rural areas have varied scenery”);3) 用連接詞(because, also, for example)使句子更流暢;4) 減少猶豫聲和填充詞。

Ví dụ: I usually prefer rural areas because I live in the city and enjoy the varied scenery and fresh air there. For example, I like exploring quiet villages and trying outdoor activities I can't do at home.

Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答表意清楚但有多個詞彙和語法錯誤(如“reviews”, “trolling”用法不當),語句重複且填充詞過多。建議:1) 明確主題句(I prefer views in other countries.);2) 使用正確詞彙(travel instead of trolling; views/scenery instead of reviews);3) 提供具體例子或細節(which scenery or culture you like);4) 練習去除不必要停頓以提高流利度。

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling abroad exposes me to different landscapes and cultures. For instance, I loved photographing colorful markets in Morocco and dramatic coastlines in Portugal, which I would never see at home.

Ngữ pháp

8: Verb + -ing form

× I'm fond of taking pictures in different views because if I lose some, uh, before sculpture, I will to, uh, record it, uh, in my phone and sometimes I will, uh, review this. I think that is a very, uh, meaningful things.

I'm fond of taking pictures of different views because if I lose some (for example, a sculpture), I will record it on my phone and sometimes I review them. I think that is very meaningful.

错误主要涉及动名词及与之搭配的代词和名词单复数:"take pictures of" 更常用,"in different views" 改为 "of different views";"will to record" 错误地加了不定式词 'to',正确应为 "will record"(动词原形随助动词 will);"record it on my phone" 中应使用介词 "on";代词 "this" 指代前文 "pictures" 应为复数 "them";"a very meaningful things" 中名词单复数和冠词冲突,应为 "very meaningful" 或 "a very meaningful thing"。建议:学习动名词的固定搭配(fond of + -ing),注意助动词后用动词原形,代词须与先行词在数上保持一致,复查可数名词单复数及冠词使用。

27: Subject-verb agreement errors

× Uh, sometimes I prefer use in rural areas because I stay in city and I think, uh, rural has many different scenery and I also like to try some new things.

Sometimes I prefer to go to rural areas because I live in the city and I think rural areas have a lot of different scenery. I also like to try new things.

存在主谓一致及动词搭配错误:"prefer use" 应为 "prefer to use" 或更合适的表达 "prefer to go to";"I stay in city" 用词不自然,应为 "I live in the city"(冠词和动词);"rural has many different scenery" 中主语与谓语及不可数名词使用错误,"rural" 应具体为 "rural areas","scenery" 是不可数名词,不能用 "many",改为 "have a lot of different scenery" 或 "have many different scenes"。建议:注意 prefer 的常见结构(prefer to do / prefer doing),city 前通常加定冠词 the,scenery 为不可数名词不能与 many 连用。

8: Verb + -ing form

× Uh, I prefer reviews in other countries because I really enjoy trolling in foreign countries. A foreign place often offer some different and interesting scenery that, uh, I don't know before. Uh, so I like discovering some new things and learn some, uh, other cultures.

I prefer views in other countries because I really enjoy traveling in foreign countries. A foreign place often offers different and interesting scenery that I didn't know about before. So I like discovering new things and learning about other cultures.

包含动词形式和时态、主谓一致问题:"prefer reviews" 错把 "views" 误写为 "reviews";"enjoy trolling" 用词错误,应为 "enjoy traveling"(或 "enjoy touring");"offer" 与主语 "A foreign place" 不一致,应为第三人称单数 "offers";"I don't know before" 时态和结构不当,描述过去的未知应使用过去时或完成时,如 "I didn't know about before";"like discovering ... and learn" 动词并列需保持一致,应为 "discovering ... and learning"。建议:注意 enjoy 后接动名词(-ing),主语为第三人称时动词加 -s,表达过去体验用过去时或完成时,并保持并列动词形式一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ForeignOverseas; Unfamiliar
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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