Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally natural and relevant, but you can improve coherence and concision. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler phrases like 'not my cup of tea' without brief explanation, and link your example explicitly to the topic. Also try to add one specific detail about what you found interesting to make the response more vivid.

Ví dụ: I don't usually take many photographs, but I do capture scenes that catch my eye. For instance, when I visited Vancouver last year, I photographed the mountain ranges at sunrise because the light and mist made the scene dramatic.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a clear preference and a personal reason, which is good. To improve, make the structure tighter: start with a direct statement, then give one or two specific supporting details and use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'for example'). Correct minor grammatical issues (e.g. 'views of mountain birds' is odd — say 'mountains, birds, and rivers').

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views to urban scenery because they feel calmer and more natural. For example, growing up in the countryside, I enjoy scenes of rolling mountains, singing birds, and winding rivers, which relax me more than busy city streets.

Gợi ý: The answer attempts to give a preference and reasons but is unclear and contains repetition and an incomplete sentence ('I find I will'). To improve, make a clear present-tense statement of preference, provide two concise reasons (e.g. cost and familiarity), and give a brief specific example or contrast. Avoid repetition and check grammar.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because it's cheaper and easier to travel around, and I feel a strong personal connection to the landscapes. For example, I can visit a nearby coastal town on short notice and enjoy familiar beaches that remind me of home.

× However, I do take some pictures whenever I find something interesting.

✓ However, I take some pictures whenever I find something interesting.

Removing 'do' makes the sentence more natural in simple present. 'Do' is only required for emphasis or in negative/questions. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions without auxiliary unless emphasizing.

× For example, when I traveled to Vancouver last year, I took a lot of pictures of mountains.

✓ For example, when I travelled to Vancouver last year, I took a lot of pictures of mountains.

Either 'traveled' or 'travelled' is acceptable; choose consistent spelling variety (American: 'traveled', British: 'travelled'). The sentence is otherwise correct. Suggestion: pick one spelling style and use it consistently.

× I find the views of rural areas more beautiful than the urban areas or the cities.

✓ I find views in rural areas more beautiful than those in urban areas or cities.

Using 'the' before 'urban areas' and 'cities' is unnecessary and awkward. Also use 'those' to avoid repeating 'views'. Suggestion: omit definite articles when speaking generally and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× The reason behind it is that as I grew up in the rural area, I feel more attached to it and the views of mountain birds and the rivers.

✓ The reason is that, having grown up in a rural area, I feel more attached to it and to the views of mountains, birds and rivers.

'Behind it' is wordy; 'The reason is that' is clearer. Use 'having grown up' to link past background to current feeling. Use 'a rural area' (general) rather than 'the rural area'. 'Views of mountain birds and the rivers' is incorrect grouping; list nouns clearly and drop unnecessary 'the'. Suggestion: simplify phrasing, use correct articles and parallel nouns.

× I enjoyed the views of my country as when compared to the other countries.

✓ I prefer the views of my country compared to those of other countries.

Mixing past 'enjoyed' with general preference is inconsistent; 'prefer' (present) fits the question. 'As when compared to the other countries' is ungrammatical—use 'compared to those of other countries' and avoid unnecessary articles. Suggestion: use present tense for general preferences and concise comparative phrases.

× The reason behind this is because I find I will.

✓ This is because I find it more convenient and economical to travel within my own country.

Original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical ('I find I will' is meaningless). Provide a complete explanation matching the following sentence about convenience and economy. Suggestion: always ensure clauses have subjects and verbs that convey the intended meaning.

× I find it is more economical and easier to travel in my own country and I feel attached.

✓ I find it more economical and easier to travel in my own country, and I feel attached to it.

Omit redundant 'it is' and add 'to it' after 'attached' to complete the expression. Use a comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'attached to' and concise verb phrases.