Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
I like taking pictures, uh, uh, of different views, uh, because I uh, stay curiosity to uh, my environment. I like to take photos of different people, different things, different trees, different flowers and different rivers. It made me different.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I really prefer views in urban, rural in urban areas, because the urban areas has much unique trees, flowers, umm uh, blue sky and cute animals and other. And in rural areas there are much, there are much buildings high.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I prefer first views in my own country because I never went to other countries. I just know about the views about my own country. My own country have many have a mix of unique trees and colorful flowers, blue skies and small animals like squirrels. I also enjoy the Lebanon atmosphere and interesting.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意流利度与连贯性,减少填充词(如 uh, um),并用一到两句简洁的主题句加具体细节支撑。可以加入原因或感受并使用连接词使句子更自然。练习把零散词组整合成完整句子,例如用 because, so, for example 等连接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing various scenes because it helps me notice details in my surroundings. For example, I often photograph people, trees, flowers and rivers to capture different moods and colors, which makes my photos more interesting.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且结构清晰。先给出明确立场(urban or rural),然后用一到两句具体理由或比较支持你的观点,避免自相矛盾。注意语法与词序(urban areas has → urban areas have;避免重复)。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of interesting scenes. For instance, urban parks often have unique trees and flowers, clear blue sky spots and small animals, while rural areas tend to have large fields and fewer architectural contrasts.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要逻辑清楚並避免多余重复。先表明偏好并给原因(例如 familiarity, memories, specific scenery),用具体例子说明。纠正语法(have → has;I never went → I have never been)。结尾可加一句展望(if I travel, I would like to...)。
Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because I have never been abroad and I feel familiar with its landscapes. For example, my country has unique trees, colorful flowers and small animals like squirrels, and I enjoy the warm atmosphere there; however, I would like to see foreign scenery someday.
× I like taking pictures, uh, uh, of different views, uh, because I uh, stay curiosity to uh, my environment.
✓ I like taking pictures of different views because I am curious about my environment.
主谓一致与词类使用错误。“stay curiosity to”不是正确表达。正确表达应该用系动词+形容词或动词短语,表示“我感到好奇”用“am curious about”或“am interested in”。建议:使用系动词be + 形容词(am curious),并用介词about引出对象。
× It made me different.
✓ It makes me different.
时态和表达不自然。原句用past tense 'made' 与上下文现在习惯性活动不符,应使用一般现在时'makes'。此外表达含义不明,这里用'makes me different'意为“使我与众不同”。建议:根据上下文选用正确时态(习惯性动作用一般现在时)。
× I really prefer views in urban, rural in urban areas, because the urban areas has much unique trees, flowers, umm uh, blue sky and cute animals and other.
✓ I really prefer views in urban areas because urban areas have many unique trees, flowers, blue skies, cute animals, and more.
主谓一致与名词数错误。“the urban areas has”中主语复数应与动词复数一致,改为“urban areas have”。“much unique trees”用法不当,修饰可数名词应用“many unique trees”。“blue sky”作复数景观要用“blue skies”。并简化重复词。建议:可数名词用many,保持主谓一致,去掉多余词。
× And in rural areas there are much, there are much buildings high.
✓ And in rural areas there are many tall buildings.
“much”用于不可数名词,不能修饰可数名词“buildings”,应使用“many”。此外“buildings high”语序错误,形容词应放在名词前或用“are tall buildings”。建议:可数复数名词前用many,形容词置于名词前或用系动词+形容词。
× I prefer first views in my own country because I never went to other countries.
✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I have never been to other countries.
时态错误。句中说明至今从未去过其他国家,应使用现在完成时“have never been”而不是一般过去“never went”。另外“prefer first views”不自然,改为“prefer the views”。建议:表示从过去持续到现在的经历用现在完成时。
× I just know about the views about my own country.
✓ I only know about the views in my own country.
多余介词和词选择问题。“just”在此语境可改为“only”。同时“views about my own country”应为“views in my own country”。建议:简化重复的介词,使用常见搭配“views in”。
× My own country have many have a mix of unique trees and colorful flowers, blue skies and small animals like squirrels.
✓ My own country has a mix of unique trees, colorful flowers, blue skies, and small animals like squirrels.
主谓一致错误,“My own country”作为单数主语应使用“has”。句中还存在重复“have many have”,需要删除多余部分并调整词序。建议:注意主语单复数,去掉重复词,使用并列名词短语。
× I also enjoy the Lebanon atmosphere and interesting.
✓ I also enjoy the Lebanese atmosphere; it is interesting.
形容词形式错误。“Lebanon atmosphere”应使用形容词形式“Lebanese atmosphere”。原句“and interesting”缺主语谓语,需补全为“It is interesting”或用分号连接。建议:国家名作为形容词用-ese或其他正确形式(例如 Lebanese),并确保句子结构完整。