Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be careful with grammar (subject-verb agreement and articles) and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it has a soothing effect on me. For example, I often capture sunsets and rivers, which calm me after a busy day. Also, I use a high-quality camera that helps record fine details and vibrant colors.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence then add one specific reason with a linking word. Use more precise vocabulary and avoid vague phrases like “make the picture more appealing.”

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because the open fields and natural landscapes create a calmer, more picturesque scene. For instance, the rolling fields and small streams provide interesting textures and colors that enhance my photos.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and word choice (use articles, correct plural forms and word order). Begin with a direct statement, then give one or two specific comparisons or reasons, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country, India, because its wide open fields and varied countryside feel peaceful. For example, the mustard fields and hill stations here offer vibrant colors and unique moods that I don't often find elsewhere.

× Definitely, I love to take pictures of different views as it give me a soothing effect.

✓ Definitely, I love to take pictures of different views as they give me a soothing effect.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'pictures' (or to the general activity), so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'give'. Suggestion: match pronoun and verb number to the noun they refer to; you can also rephrase to 'because taking pictures gives me a soothing feeling.' Note: This maps to Grammar Problem Type ID 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× Moreover, I have a high quality camera that takes a beautiful picture.

✓ Moreover, I have a high-quality camera that takes beautiful pictures.

Article and noun form error: 'high quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when used as a compound adjective before a noun; 'a beautiful picture' suggests a single photo, but general meaning requires plural 'pictures' (or 'beautiful photos'). Use no article with plural. Suggestion: use compound adjective hyphenation and plural noun for general statements. Maps to Grammar Problem Type ID 22 (Article errors) and 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× I usually prefer views of rural areas as there are fields which make the picture more appealing.

✓ I usually prefer views of rural areas because there are fields that make the pictures more appealing.

Use of 'which' vs 'that' and consistency in number: 'which' is often used for non-defining clauses; here a defining clause 'that' is better. Also 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match general meaning. 'As' is acceptable but 'because' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'that' for essential clauses and keep noun number consistent. Maps to Grammar Problem Type ID 3 (There be issue) and 1 (Singular and plural issue).

× For the views I always prefer my country India as there are plethora of fields which an open spaces that look more peaceful and visually appealing.

✓ For views, I always prefer my country, India, because there is a plethora of fields and open spaces that look more peaceful and visually appealing.

Multiple errors: 'there are plethora of fields' is incorrect — 'a plethora' requires singular verb 'is' and the article 'a'; 'which an open spaces' is ungrammatical and mixes 'which' with 'an' and plural 'spaces'. Rephrase to 'a plethora of fields and open spaces' and use 'that' for the defining clause. Also add commas around 'India' as an appositive and change 'for the views' to 'for views' or 'Regarding views' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct articles with quantifiers ('a plethora of'), keep parallel structure in noun phrases, and use 'that' for essential information. Maps to Grammar Problem Type ID 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers), 22 (Article errors), and 26 (Sentence structure errors).