Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (verb forms, articles, pluralization) and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers under five sentences and avoid redundant or unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, my relatives often ask me to photograph family events because I like capturing candid moments, and I also enjoy shooting landscapes that show the atmosphere of special occasions. These activities give me a strong sense of satisfaction and motivate me to improve my photography.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear direct answer (urban or rural) and then give two concise, specific reasons linked with words like 'because' or 'because of'. Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement) and remove hesitations. Keep it coherent and no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the lively atmosphere of cities. For instance, I like the variety of restaurants, shops and libraries, and the city lights in the evening create an exciting and familiar feeling. These elements make urban scenes more appealing to me.

Gợi ý: Answer directly which you prefer (own country or other countries) and give specific reasons or examples. Use correct tense and clearer phrasing, avoid vague or repeated phrases, and limit to 3–4 coherent sentences with linking words like 'for example' or 'because'.

Ví dụ: I prefer the views in my own country because I enjoy exploring its diverse landscapes and historical sites. For example, there are many tourist attractions with interesting architecture and rich history, and visiting them helps me appreciate my culture more. Sometimes I also like traveling abroad to compare different styles of scenery.

× I absolutely love to taking pictures because I'm very much photogenic, not only because I believe so, but my cousins and most of my noon call me for their family events to capture candid moment and our landscapes in magic view of these special events.

✓ I absolutely love taking pictures because I am very fond of photography; not only do I think so, but my cousins and most of my relatives call me for their family events to capture candid moments and landscapes during these special occasions.

The phrase 'love to taking' mixes 'love to + verb' and 'love + verb-ing'; use one form: 'love taking'. 'I'm very much photogenic' is incorrect because 'photogenic' describes a person who looks good in photos; better to say 'fond of photography' or 'enjoy photography'. 'Noon' is wrong word, likely 'relatives' or 'family' and 'call me' should be present simple for habitual action. 'Moment' should be plural 'moments'. 'Our landscapes in magic view' is unclear; rephrased to 'landscapes during these special occasions' for clarity and correct noun forms.

× I prefer to the urban Indian straddles from the rural world because it make me mind of uh, the restaurant, shops, convenience store and the library atmosphere.

✓ I prefer urban areas to rural ones because they remind me of restaurants, shops, convenience stores and the atmosphere of libraries.

Incorrect preposition use: 'prefer to the urban Indian straddles from the rural world' is ungrammatical. Correct pattern is 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer urban areas to rural ones'. 'Make me mind of' should be 'remind me of'. Use plural nouns for general items: 'restaurants, shops, convenience stores'. Also 'the library atmosphere' rephrased to 'the atmosphere of libraries' for natural English.

× And I love watching the city lights and big city in the evening feels exciting and familiar reminds.

✓ I love watching the city lights; the big city in the evening feels exciting and familiar.

The original sentence mixes clauses without proper agreement and word order. '...and big city in the evening feels...' needs an article and subject-verb agreement: 'the big city ... feels'. The verb 'reminds' is dangling without an object; removing it or rephrasing fixes sentence structure. Split into two parts and ensure verbs agree with their subjects.

× Of course, I love to see the scenery of my country visiting different locations in my location time.

✓ Of course, I love seeing the scenery of my country by visiting different locations in my free time.

Use 'love seeing' (verb + -ing) or 'love to see' but keep structure natural: 'love seeing the scenery'. 'Visiting different locations in my location time' is incorrect; likely 'by visiting different locations in my free time'. Tense remains present habitual, so present tense forms are appropriate.

× There are lots of tourist places in my country. People came there for historical event uh for came for the architectural or different purposes of.

✓ There are lots of tourist places in my country. People come there for historical events, for architecture, or for different purposes.

The verb 'came' (past) is inconsistent with the present general statement 'There are lots...'; use present simple 'come' for habitual or general truths. 'Historical event' should be plural 'historical events'. 'For came for the architectural' is ungrammatical; correct to 'for architecture' or 'to see architectural sites'. Ensure parallel structure in the list: 'for historical events, for architecture, or for other purposes.'