Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), give one or two specific examples with brief details, and keep to under five sentences. Also correct exaggerations (e.g., "millions") and clarify the recent example (where you were traveling, what you photographed). Use linking words like "for example" and "such as" appropriately.

Ví dụ: I really enjoy photographing different landscapes, such as beaches, forests and farms. For example, on a recent train journey from my hometown I photographed rolling fields and grazing animals, focusing on the way light fell on the scene. I especially like capturing natural textures like tree bark and water reflections.

Gợi ý: Be clear and diplomatic: state your preference in one sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words (because, while, whereas). Avoid vague or negative generalizations about rural areas; instead describe concrete features you prefer in urban photography (architecture, lighting, activity). Keep the answer within three sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing urban areas because I enjoy architectural details and varied street scenes. For example, city buildings offer interesting shapes and lighting at dusk, whereas rural scenes can be quieter and less varied. Therefore I often choose cities when I want dynamic and structured compositions.

Gợi ý: Respond directly and politely: start with a clear statement of preference, provide specific reasons and one concrete example of a foreign place you'd like to photograph. Avoid repeating fillers and vague negative comments about your country; instead mention what appeals to you abroad (unique landmarks, architecture, cultural scenes). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer photographing views in other countries because they offer unique landmarks and architectural variety. For instance, I dream of visiting Paris to photograph the Eiffel Tower and the contrast between historic streets and modern life. Visiting abroad usually gives me fresh perspectives and new subjects to capture.

× I love taking pictures of different landscapes, uh, varying from, uh, beaches, uh, forest, trees, greenery, as well as farms, that is, of animals.

✓ I love taking pictures of different landscapes, such as beaches, forests, trees, greenery, and farms with animals.

Original uses 'varying from' awkwardly and mixes singular/plural (forest) and an unclear phrase 'that is, of animals'. This is an issue with noun forms and the use of phrases; the correction replaces 'varying from' with 'such as' and pluralizes 'forest' to 'forests'. Suggestion: use 'such as' to introduce examples and ensure nouns match plurality.

× For example, recently I was traveling by train, uh, from my home country, from traveling by train and I took millions.

✓ For example, recently I was traveling by train from my home country and I took millions of photos.

Sentence repeats 'traveling by train' and ends with 'I took millions' which lacks an object. This is a sentence structure error. Correction removes repetition and adds the object 'of photos'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and include the object after quantifiers.

× Uh, I would love to take pictures or views in urban areas, uh, because I believe, uh, rural areas, they are yet to get developed and, and there is more of the, I would say sewage and poor development of the areas, whether in urban areas you can have a view of.

✓ I would prefer to take pictures in urban areas because I believe rural areas are less developed and have more sewage and poor infrastructure; urban areas offer better views.

Original uses redundant 'rural areas, they are' (incorrect pronoun/subject use) and awkward phrasing 'there is more of the, I would say sewage'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and awkward sentence construction. Correction removes redundancy, rephrases for clarity, and fixes noun phrases. Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns and use clear noun phrases like 'have more sewage' and 'poor infrastructure'.

× I prefer views, uh, in foreign countries as in my experience, uh, when I traveled my country, that was the views, they were not more appealing.

✓ I prefer views in foreign countries because, in my experience, when I traveled in my country, the views were not very appealing.

Original mixes tense and uses awkward pronoun structure 'that was the views, they were'. This is a present tense and sentence structure issue. Correction uses present tense 'prefer' and past tense 'traveled' appropriately and simplifies to 'the views were not very appealing'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and avoid redundant pronouns.

× Uh, and for example, I have a dream of going foreign country, specially the Paris and capturing the Eiffel Tower.

✓ For example, I dream of going to a foreign country, especially Paris, and photographing the Eiffel Tower.

Original omits the preposition 'to' before 'foreign country' and misuses 'specially' and 'the Paris'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles. Correction adds 'to', uses 'a foreign country' and 'especially Paris' without 'the'. Suggestion: use 'going to' with countries/cities and 'especially' instead of 'specially'; do not use 'the' before most city names.