Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., "because because", "sunset sunrise").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunrises and sunsets because the colours are beautiful, and I also take many photos of dogs when I see them. As a result, my gallery is full of vivid landscapes and cute pet photos.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then explain with clear reasons and specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Use linking words (because, whereas, for example) to structure your answer. Correct unclear vocabulary like "acidic" which doesn't fit here.

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because I enjoy the variety of architecture and city lights. For example, I like photographing skyscrapers at night when their reflections create interesting patterns. Whereas rural views are peaceful, I find urban scenes more dynamic and photogenic.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same point. Provide one or two specific contrasts between local and foreign views and use linking words to connect ideas. Fix grammar ("my country have" → "my country has").

Ví dụ: I would say both. My country has many beautiful coastal and mountain views that I enjoy frequently, but I also admire landscapes abroad, for example Switzerland's alpine scenery, which is stunningly different. Therefore I appreciate local convenience and the novelty of foreign landscapes.

× Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because because I can't save them I can just take them.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because I can't always save them, so I can at least take photos.

Error type maps to 26: Sentence structure errors. The sentence repeats 'because' and has unclear structure and word choice ('save them I can just take them'). Suggestion: remove the duplicate word, break into two clauses with a conjunction, and use a clearer verb phrase ('save them' may need an adverb like 'always'). Improvement tips: read the sentence aloud to spot repetitions, use commas to separate clauses, and choose precise verbs (e.g., 'take photos').

× No, so I like sunset sunrise.

✓ No, I like sunsets and sunrises.

Error types map to 22: Article errors and 26: Sentence structure errors. The nouns need plural forms and coordination. Use plural 'sunsets' and 'sunrises' or add articles if singular ('the sunset, the sunrise'). Improvement tips: when referring generally to repeated events, use plurals; connect items with 'and'.

× I find everything fascinating so I want picture of everything.

✓ I find everything fascinating, so I want a picture of everything.

Error types 22: Article errors and 11: Incorrect use of prepositions. The noun 'picture' requires an article 'a' and the preposition 'of' is correct but the sentence needs a comma. Improvement tips: use 'a' before singular countable nouns; add punctuation to separate clauses.

× Actually my gallery is filled with full of sunsets and cute pictures of dogs I do love taking pictures of.

✓ Actually, my gallery is full of sunsets and cute pictures of dogs that I love taking.

Error types 26: Sentence structure errors and 22: Article errors. 'filled with full of' is redundant and incorrect — use 'full of' or 'filled with'. Also reorder the relative clause: 'that I love taking' or 'that I love to take'. Improvement tips: choose one expression ('full of' or 'filled with'), place modifying clauses after the noun they describe, and use commas appropriately.

× Umm to be honest, views are views anyway they are right I but I do prefer views in urban areas because they look more I can see them in a more nice acidic way or something.

✓ To be honest, views are views, but I prefer urban views because they are more visually striking and I like the atmosphere there.

Error type 26: Sentence structure errors. The original has filler words ('right I'), incomplete comparative structure ('look more I can see them in a more nice acidic way'), and an unclear adjective 'acidic'. Replace with clear description 'visually striking' and remove fillers. Improvement tips: eliminate filler words, use clear adjectives, and keep clause connectors ('but') to show contrast.

× And in rural areas it's more about kinda I. I'm not saying they will be the.

✓ In rural areas, it's more about peacefulness and natural scenery. I'm not saying they're worse, just different.

Error type 26: Sentence structure errors. The original fragments 'kinda I' and 'they will be the' are incomplete and unclear. Provide a concrete noun phrase ('peacefulness and natural scenery') and complete the comparative thought with 'worse' or another adjective. Improvement tips: avoid sentence fragments, finish comparisons, and replace vague 'kinda' with specific descriptions.

× I would say both because my country have many great views that I can't take my eyes off from and the in other countries like Switzerland they have breathtaking views.

✓ I would say both because my country has many great views that I can't take my eyes off, and other countries like Switzerland also have breathtaking views.

Error types 27: Subject-verb agreement ('my country have' should be 'my country has') and 22: Article errors ('the in other countries' is incorrect). Also 'take my eyes off from' is nonstandard — use 'can't take my eyes off' without 'from'. Improvement tips: ensure subject and verb agree in number, remove unnecessary articles, and use standard idiomatic expressions ('can't take my eyes off').

× So I would say both. I love looking at the views and I can prefer both right?

✓ So I would say both. I love looking at views and I can appreciate both types, right?

Error type 26: Sentence structure errors and 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (word choice). 'I can prefer both' is awkward; 'appreciate both types' is clearer. Improvement tips: use verbs that match meaning ('prefer' implies choosing one; 'appreciate' fits liking both), and avoid redundant words like 'the' before plural 'views' when speaking generally.