Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and avoid fillers (uh, um). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct basic grammar (e.g. "a pictures" → "pictures").

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views because it helps me relax and focus. For example, when I photograph a sunset at the riverside, the changing colors calm me and I enjoy composing the scene.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference sentence, then explain with specific reasons and linking words. Remove hesitation words and correct articles and singular/plural errors ("a urban areas" → "urban areas").

Ví dụ: I prefer views in urban areas because they offer diverse architecture and vibrant street life. For instance, city skylines and historic buildings provide interesting subjects and lively backgrounds for photos.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear reason with specific details. Avoid vague phrases and fix grammar ("another view than in other countries" is unclear; "my countries" → "my country"). Use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because they often have landscapes and landmarks that I haven't seen before. For example, I enjoyed photographing coastal cliffs and ancient temples when I traveled abroad, which are very different from the scenery in my country.

× I like taking pictures so much because when I take a pictures I feel uh, relaxing and I like it so much.

✓ I like taking pictures so much because when I take pictures I feel relaxed and I enjoy it a lot.

Errors: unnecessary article before the plural noun 'pictures' and wrong use of 'relaxing' as adjective for feeling. According to rule 8 (Verb + -ing form), 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation, while the speaker's sensation should use the past participle/adjective 'relaxed' or 'feel relaxed'. Also 'take a pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun. Suggestion: remove 'a' before plural nouns and use 'relaxed' to describe how you feel; replace repeated phrases like 'I like it so much' with 'I enjoy it a lot' for naturalness.

× I prefer, uh, the, uh, views in a urban areas because, uh, it's very beautiful and uh, amazing place.

✓ I prefer the views in urban areas because they're very beautiful and amazing places.

Errors: incorrect article usage (rule 22). 'The views' is acceptable but 'a urban areas' mixes indefinite article 'a' with plural 'areas' and uses 'a' before a vowel sound; correct form is 'urban areas' without 'a' or 'an'. Also singular 'place' conflicts with plural 'areas', so use 'places' or make both singular. Suggestion: remove the article before the plural noun and match number agreement: 'urban areas' and 'places' or 'an urban area' and 'a beautiful and amazing place'.

× That's a good question. Actually, I prefer, uh, another view than in other countries because, uh, in my countries there, there is no a lot of, uh, beautiful view views.

✓ That's a good question. Actually, I prefer views in other countries because in my country there are not many beautiful views.

Errors: pronoun and noun number mistakes (rule 12) and article/quantifier errors (rule 22/14). 'Another view than in other countries' is incorrect phrasing; use 'views in other countries'. 'My countries' should be 'my country' unless the speaker has multiple countries; use singular 'country'. 'There is no a lot of beautiful view views' mixes 'there is' with plural and misuses 'a lot of' and repeats 'view'. Correct form: 'there are not many beautiful views' or 'there aren't a lot of beautiful views'. Suggestion: use correct singular/plural forms, match 'there is/are' to the noun number, and avoid repeating words.