Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy landscapes and animals. For example, I often photograph the cats and dogs.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I preferred wheels in urban areas because I like living the city landscapes. For example, I can often walk along with the Riverside.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
No doubt that I prefer will in my own country because I living in there seems long city.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和用词需要更自然准确。回答应直接开始主题句,随后用一到两句具体细节支持并使用连词使表达连贯。注意复数与单数、冠词和介词的使用(例如:‘photograph cats and dogs’ 而不是 ‘the cats and dogs’ 取决于语境)。避免不必要重复,比如同时说 ‘landscapes and animals’ 后又举重复的普通例子,应更具体,如说明喜欢拍摄哪类风景或动物的特点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photographs of different views. I especially like landscapes because I can capture wide skies and changing light, and I also photograph local cats and dogs when they show interesting expressions.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 表达有明显语法和词汇错误,导致句意不清楚。应使用现在时回答偏好(prefer),避免错误词如 ‘wheels’。将主题句清晰表达,并用一至两句具体细节解释原因,使用连词连接观点和例子。注意固定搭配,如 ‘city landscapes’ 可改为 ‘urban scenery’,‘walk along the riverside’ 更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the city's architecture and lively streets. For example, I often walk along the riverside and admire the mix of old buildings and modern bridges.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 句子语法严重错误且表达模糊。应直接用简单清晰的主题句说明偏好,随后给出具体原因并用连词衔接。注意人称与时态(e.g. ‘I prefer views in my own country because…’),并提供明确理由(文化熟悉、自然景观或方便拍摄等)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and know the best spots to photograph. For instance, I can easily visit historic towns and scenic rivers that reflect local culture.
× I preferred wheels in urban areas because I like living the city landscapes.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I like living in the city's landscapes.
句子使用了过去时动词“preferred”,但说话者是在陈述一般偏好,应使用一般现在时“prefer”。此外原句有拼写/用词错误(“wheels” 应为 “views”),以及介词和名词所有格用法不当。“living the city landscapes” 应改为 “living in the city's landscapes” 或更自然的 “living in the city”/“the city's landscape”。建议:表达一般习惯或偏好时使用一般现在时,注意拼写并使用恰当的介词和所有格。
× For example, I can often walk along with the Riverside.
✓ For example, I can often walk along the riverside.
短语“walk along with”用法不自然且冗余,英语中常用“walk along the riverside”或“walk by the riverside”。此外“Riverside”不需要大写,除非是专有地名。建议:使用固定搭配“walk along + 地点”,不要加多余的“with”。
× No doubt that I prefer will in my own country because I living in there seems long city.
✓ No doubt that I prefer my own country because I have lived there for a long time.
原句存在多重问题:错误使用“will”(与“prefer”搭配不当),动词时态混乱(“living”单独使用不完整),以及不自然的表达“seems long city”。根据语境,应表达“我在那儿住了很长时间”,因此使用现在完成时“have lived”。建议:表示从过去延续到现在的经历或状态用现在完成时;不要把助动词“will”放在“prefer”后面;注意句子完整性。
× For example, I often photograph the cats and dogs.
✓ For example, I often photograph cats and dogs.
在泛指动物种类时,不需要在名词前加定冠词“the”。使用复数名词直接泛指更自然:"cats and dogs"。建议:表示一般性事实或爱好时,用复数名词不加冠词,除非特指某些猫狗。
× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy landscapes and animals.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I enjoy photographing landscapes and animals.
原句语法基本正确,但“enjoy landscapes and animals”更自然的表达是动名词短语“enjoy photographing landscapes and animals”,这样与前半句保持平行,且清楚表示“喜欢拍摄”。建议:使用动名词或动词短语以明确动作,与前句平行。