Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel or visit new place. For example, I like taking photos of city skylines, parks or beautiful sunset. I think different view can make photos look more interesting and unique.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Thí sinh
I prefer views in urban areas. I like seeing tall buildings, busy streets and city lights. I think city views are more lively and interesting, especially at night. The skyline looks very beautiful so I enjoy taking photos of it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer wheels in other countries. When I travel I can see different landscapes and buildings that I don't usually see in my home country. I think these view are more fresh and interesting so I enjoy taking photos of them.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Điểm: 84.0Gợi ý: 总体不错:回答直接且内容相关,给出了具体例子。但存在小语法和表达不够自然的问题(如冠词、单复数、拼写),句子略显重复。建议注意冠词使用、复数形式,合并相似句子以提高流畅度,并适当使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing different views when I travel or visit a new place. For example, I often shoot city skylines, parks and sunsets because they add variety and make photos more interesting and unique.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Điểm: 88.0Gợi ý: 回答清晰,结构良好并包含细节与理由。但可用更多连接词使句子更连贯,并增加一两个具体例子(如某城市或夜景拍摄体验)以增强说服力。同时避免短句堆砌。
Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because I enjoy tall buildings, busy streets and vibrant city lights. For example, photographing the skyline at night in Hong Kong or New York creates dramatic contrasts and lively compositions, which I find more inspiring than rural scenes.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答思路明确但存在明显错误与用词不当(如“wheels”应为“views”或“places”,单复数与冠词错误)。句子较重复,细节不够具体。建议先修正词汇错误,使用明确的主题句并提供具体比较或例子(说明哪些国家或景观更吸引你)。
Ví dụ: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me encounter landscapes and architecture that are uncommon at home. For instance, I enjoyed photographing the colorful street markets and colonial buildings in Lisbon, which felt fresher and more interesting than familiar local scenes.
× I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel or visit new place.
✓ I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel or visit a new place.
句子中缺少不定冠词“a”来修饰可数名词“new place”。在英文中,单数可数名词前通常需要冠词或指示词。建议在“new place”前加上“a”。
× For example, I like taking photos of city skylines, parks or beautiful sunset.
✓ For example, I like taking photos of city skylines, parks or beautiful sunsets.
“sunset”在这里指一类景象,與其他並列的名詞(skylines, parks)一致,应使用复数形式“sunsets”。建议把“sunset”改为“sunsets”。
× I think different view can make photos look more interesting and unique.
✓ I think different views can make photos look more interesting and unique.
主语“different view”与动词“can”不匹配,且“different”指多个不同的景色,应使用复数“views”。主谓一致要求主语形式正确,建议将“different view”改为“different views”。
× I think I prefer wheels in other countries.
✓ I think I prefer views in other countries.
原句中的“wheels”明显是拼写或用词错误,应为“views”。此句表示一般现在时的偏好,用“prefer views”符合语境。建议把“wheels”改为“views”。
× When I travel I can see different landscapes and buildings that I don't usually see in my home country.
✓ When I travel I can see different landscapes and buildings that I don't usually see in my home country.
该句语法正确,无需修改。维持原句。
× I think these view are more fresh and interesting so I enjoy taking photos of them.
✓ I think these views are fresher and more interesting, so I enjoy taking photos of them.
“these view”中“view”应为复数“views”以配合指示代词“these”。此外,形容词“fresh”用于比较时常用比较级“fresher”;建议将句子调整为“these views are fresher and more interesting, so...”,并在两个分句之间加逗号使句子更清晰。