Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct collocations (e.g., 'natural scenes', 'architectural styles'), and limit to max 4–5 sentences. Add one specific example to make your answer more concrete. Also correct grammar (e.g., 'I'm interested in the history of buildings') and use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'because').

Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views. I especially enjoy natural scenes and architectural buildings because I’m fascinated by different architectural styles. For example, when I visited an old temple last year I took many photos to capture its intricate carvings and the peaceful atmosphere. Taking pictures helps me remember special moments and learn about history.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, fluent topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words and correct word choice (e.g., 'pollution' once). Avoid repetition ('pollutions', 'city's places'). Keep answer within 4–5 sentences and include a brief personal example to strengthen it.

Ví dụ: I prefer rural views because life there is more peaceful than in the city. For example, there is less traffic noise and cleaner air, so I can relax and take better photos. Also, rural landscapes often have unique scenery like fields and small villages that I find inspiring.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear stance in one sentence, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Use correct grammar (e.g., 'I’m not sure which I prefer, China or other countries') and linking words ('however', 'for example'). Mention a specific memory or cultural detail to make it personal and concrete.

Ví dụ: I’m not sure which I prefer, views in my own country or abroad, because both have their appeal. For example, foreign places offer new cultures and architecture, while views in China feel familiar and often remind me of my childhood memories. Therefore, I enjoy both for different reasons.

× I really love taking a lot of photographs to different views.

✓ I really love taking a lot of photographs of different views.

Use the gerund 'taking' correctly with the preposition 'of' to indicate what the photographs are of. 'To different views' is incorrect; use 'of' for objects photographed.

× It includes some of the natural rules, some of the architectures.

✓ They include some natural scenes and some architectural structures.

'It includes' is awkward because 'photographs' is plural; use 'They include'. 'Natural rules' is incorrect word choice; likely 'natural scenes'. 'Architectures' is uncountable/plural misuse; use 'architectural structures' or 'architecture'. Adjust plurality for agreement.

× It is because that I'm really interested in different styles of the buildings.

✓ This is because I am really interested in the different styles of buildings.

Use 'This is because' instead of 'It is because that'. Remove 'the' before 'buildings' only if speaking generally; here 'the different styles of buildings' is natural. Also expand contraction for formality and ensure word order.

× And when taking this kind of buildings, I'll reflect some of the beautiful memories and sometimes I'm really interested in its histories and sometimes related to its styles.

✓ When taking photos of these kinds of buildings, I recall beautiful memories; sometimes I am interested in their histories and sometimes in their styles.

Use 'taking photos of' not 'taking this kind of buildings'. 'Reflect some of the beautiful memories' is incorrect; 'recall' or 'remember' is appropriate. Use plural possessive 'their histories' and 'their styles' to match 'buildings'. Keep verb tenses consistent.

× I really love them I have.

✓ I really love them.

Sentence is redundant and ungrammatical: 'I have' is unnecessary. Remove 'I have' to produce a complete, grammatical sentence.

× It is because that in rural areas, life today is much more peaceful compared with the hustle and bustle of the city's places.

✓ This is because life in rural areas is much more peaceful compared with the hustle and bustle of city life.

Use 'This is because' not 'It is because that'. 'City's places' is incorrect; use 'city life' or 'the city'. Rearrange clause for natural word order.

× A more important reason is that in the rural places, the environment is better than the urban places because of the air pollution and a lot of pollutions and also the noises in the city places.

✓ Another important reason is that the environment in rural areas is better than in urban areas because of less air pollution and less noise in the countryside.

'A lot of pollutions' is ungrammatical; use 'air pollution' (uncountable) and 'noise' (uncountable). Simplify 'rural places'/'urban places' to 'rural areas'/'urban areas'. Use comparative structure 'better than in'.

× I don't really love living in this kind of places.

✓ I don't really like living in those kinds of places.

Use 'like' instead of 'love' for preference strength (optional) and correct 'this kind of places' to 'those kinds of places' or 'this kind of place'. Match demonstrative and number: 'this' with singular, 'those' with plural.

× It's hard to say.

✓ It's hard to say.

This sentence is grammatical and fits the context; no correction needed.

× I don't really fully understand which one is much more better compared with China or the foreign places.

✓ I don't fully understand whether the views in China are better than those in foreign countries.

'Much more better' is incorrect (double comparative). Use 'better' alone. 'Compared with China or the foreign places' is awkward; rephrase to compare 'views in China' and 'those in foreign countries'.

× I think maybe the most important thing is what we should do that, uh, maybe the domestic places is much more closer to me because it will make me reflect some of my childhood.

✓ I think the most important thing is that domestic places are closer to me because they remind me of my childhood.

Remove filler 'maybe' and 'what we should do that' which is ungrammatical. Use plural agreement 'domestic places are'. 'Much more closer' is incorrect; use 'closer'. 'Reflect some of my childhood' should be 'remind me of my childhood'.