Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 答えは簡潔だが文法と表現の自然さに改善が必要です。具体的には“want sharing”は誤りで、“want to share”とすること、また補足を付ける際はリンクワード（例えば“because”の後に具体例や理由を追加）を使い、文を2〜3文に分けて自然に広げると良いです。語彙は悪くないので“beautiful landscapes”を別の語（scenery, views, scenes）で言い換える練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos. I like to share beautiful landscapes and city scenes on Instagram because it lets my friends and family see places I visit.

Gợi ý: 構造はよいが表現の自然さと語彙の多様性を向上させる余地があります。句読点や語順を整え、“high rise”は“high-rise”に直しつつ具体例（skyscrapers, illuminated streets）を加えて強調してください。比較の表現を滑らかにするために“than those in rural areas”のようにして一文でつなぐとより自然です。

Ví dụ: I prefer urban views because cities have many high-rise buildings and lively streets. At night, skyscrapers and illuminated bridges look much more impressive than views in rural areas.

Gợi ý: 回答に重大な誤り（“abuse”は誤用）があり、意味が伝わりにくくなっています。まず単語ミスを直し（“abroad”が正しい）、語の繰り返し（“magnificent”を何度も使う）を避け、具体的な例を一つ挙げて理由を示してください。接続詞（for example, such as）を使って論理的に展開すると良いです。

Ví dụ: I prefer views abroad because I can see unique landmarks and landscapes not found at home. For example, visiting famous sculptures and historical buildings in other countries gives me a different cultural perspective.

× I enjoy taking photos because I want sharing beautiful landscapes on social media such as Instagram.

✓ I enjoy taking photos because I want to share beautiful landscapes on social media such as Instagram.

The verb 'want' should be followed by the infinitive 'to share', not the -ing form. Use 'want to + base verb' for intentions or desires. Suggestion: replace 'want sharing' with 'want to share'.

× I prefer urban views to rural ones because there are many high rise buildings in cities.

✓ I prefer urban views to rural ones because there are many high-rise buildings in cities.

The phrase 'high rise' should be hyphenated as the compound adjective 'high-rise' when modifying 'buildings'. This is a punctuation/compound word convention affecting form. Suggestion: use 'high-rise buildings'.

× The night views are more beautiful than rural ones.

✓ Night views are more beautiful than rural views.

The original is understandable but awkward: 'The night views' and 'rural ones' mix definite article use and pronoun reference. For clarity and parallel structure, omit 'The' and use 'rural views' to match 'night views'. Suggestion: use parallel noun phrases for comparison.

× I prefer abuse in other countries because there are many magnificent landscapes and magnificent buildings and sculptures that we cannot see in our country.

✓ I prefer to travel in other countries because there are many magnificent landscapes, buildings, and sculptures that we cannot see in our country.

'Abuse' is a wrong word choice (likely a typo) and pronoun/verb form is incorrect: use 'prefer to travel' or 'prefer visiting'. Also the list is repetitive; combine items with commas and 'and'. Suggestion: replace 'abuse' with 'to travel' or 'visiting', and streamline the list: 'magnificent landscapes, buildings, and sculptures'.