Views— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 句子需要更自然流畅，避免语法错误和填充词，并控制长度在最多五句内。可改进的重点有：1) 修正时态和动词形式（例如“when I travel”）；2) 删除或减少“uh”等填充词；3) 用一两句补充具体细节（拍哪些景物、用什么设备或拍照的习惯）；4) 使用连接词保持连贯，如“so”或“and then”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos, especially when I travel to other cities or countries. I like capturing landscapes and local architecture to remember special moments. After a trip, I usually review the photos and pick a few favorites to edit and share.

Gợi ý: 回答要注意时态一致并修正词汇错误，避免不完整句与重复。改进要点：1) 把“prefer”用对时态（过去用“preferred”）；2) 更正“不恰当词汇”（如“sky creatures”应为“skyscrapers”）；3) 去掉重复词并补全句子；4) 用连接词（for example, but）并给出具体原因说明（如更宁静或更接近自然）。

Ví dụ: I used to prefer urban views because I enjoyed skyscrapers and historic buildings. But now I prefer rural areas, such as national parks and mountain scenery, because they feel more peaceful and offer better opportunities for nature photography.

Gợi ý: 回答需避免口头填充词并把句子说完整，提供具体对比和理由。改进要点：1) 去掉“uh”等停顿；2) 把句子扩展成完整的对比（why you like each）；3) 提供具体例子和原因；4) 保持不超过五句并用连接词（for example, while, because）。

Ví dụ: Actually I enjoy both. In my country I love places like Tibet and Xinjiang because of their dramatic landscapes and unique cultures. While abroad, I enjoy visiting volcanic regions and coastal cliffs for their striking geological features and different light for photography.

× Yes, I really like to, especially when I traveling in other cities or countries.

✓ Yes, I really like to, especially when I travel in other cities or countries.

时态问题：句中主语 I 后的动词应使用一般现在时的原形 travel，而不是现在分词 traveling。一般现在时用于表达习惯性动作或喜好。建议记住：主语 + do/does（否定或疑问）或主语 + 动词原形（陈述）来表达一般现在时。

× When I come back, I often, uh, view the pictures to.

✓ When I come back, I often, uh, view the pictures too.

动词/副词使用错误：句末的 to 应为副词 too，表示“也”。这里不是不定式或动名词结构，不应使用 -ing。建议区分 too (也) 与 to (介词/不定式标记)。

× In the past I prefer views in urban areas such as some sky creatures or beautiful historical buildings, but now I prefer rural areas such as natural uh, natural National Park or some beautiful mountains which gives me.

✓ In the past I preferred views in urban areas such as some skyscrapers or beautiful historical buildings, but now I prefer rural areas such as natural national parks or some beautiful mountains which give me pleasure.

时态与主谓一致问题：描述过去的喜好应使用过去式 preferred，而原句用现在时 prefer 不符合时间状语 in the past。名词复数和拼写错误：sky creatures 应为 skyscrapers（摩天大楼）；National Park 应小写为 national parks 与前文复数保持一致。最后 which gives me 不完整且主谓不一致，应改为 which give me pleasure 或者 that give me pleasure（复数主语）。建议注意时间状语决定动词时态，复数名词一致与单复数主谓一致。

× Actually both. I prefer views in my country like some beautiful cities or regions such as Tibet or Xinjiang province. Uh, in other countries I also like some beautiful volcanoes and.

✓ Actually, both. I prefer views in my country, like some beautiful cities or regions such as Tibet or Xinjiang. In other countries I also like beautiful volcanoes and other natural sights.

句子结构与不完整句：first句其实可以单独成句 'Actually, both.' 更自然。Tibet 和 Xinjiang 前不需要 province（或写为 Xinjiang Province，但一般不加）。最后句子未完成，用 and 结尾导致句子残缺，应补全为 'and other natural sights' 或直接结束。建议避免以 and 结尾，保持句子完整并注意地名习惯用法。